Comment from AlvinTEthington

Excellent

This is a wonderful poem that teaches the reader much about resurrection in the world of nature. Since you put yourself in it, it does have the expression of human relationships. It shows the interconnection of the whole cosmos. (you might want to change the title to October)

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2009

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2009

thank you much :)

Comment from Nanette Mary

Excellent

Hullo Shelley Kaye ...

I can just visualise you lying out on the grass in pouring rain .... in the Summer time, of course!
There is nothing to suggest changing in this short work and, as it is a Contest entry, I wish you well.
With love from ..... Nanette Mary.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2009

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2009

summer?!?? EWWWW!!!!!!!!!
thanx lots for cruisin' by! :-)

Comment from thewriter1970

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your poem.

This is a very nice Naani poem.

Good luck in the contest.

I look forward to reading more of your work.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2009

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2009

thank you writer

Comment from Plotosaurus

Excellent

This is a fine example of a Naani poem and a strong contest entry. Is the title supposed to be roctober musings or october musings?

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2009

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2009

ROCKtober ;-)

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

This is a very well written poem. I like the idea of being refreshed by bonding with the earth. I find the mountains outside of my home to be very refreshing. Good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2009

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2009

thank you much :)

reply by c_lucas on 16-Oct-2009

You're welcome, Shelley. Charlie

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

Shelley

A nice gentle rain I love very much, but some of the rain they are getting in the south and elsewhere is destroying everything in its path. Your Naani appears to be the gentle kind that will urge things to grow again. WEll done.

Carol

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2009

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2009

thankythankya :-)

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

I like your Naani poem. This is a new type of poetry that I've never seen or read before. It is well written and interesting. Kudos to you

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2009

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2009

thank you much :)

Comment from donnadiann

Excellent

I especially love anything written about rain, and you mentioned it. I just got back from a walk in the rain myself. Wonderfully written.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2009

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2009

cool! love walking in the rain! :-D

reply by donnadiann on 15-Oct-2009

Thanks!

Comment from RebelRose

Excellent

Good contest entry. The lines flow smooth with good imagery. We are getting plenty of rain here in Georgia on our not-so-arid earth.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2009

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2009

thankyathankya :)

Comment from NicoLeAnn

Excellent

Wow! Really beautiful poem!
I can see it! Even feel it!
That's really all a reader can ask for!
I think you did an amazing job on this writing!
Five stars from me!!

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2009

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2009

cool! thank you so much! :-)