Flash Fiction Collection
a selection of my best flash fiction26 total reviews
Comment from baskers89
Rating of Chapter 1 - Into the Gathering Storm
What amazing imagery. I really feel like I am there and have a sense of the characters through the description, Beatifully written
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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What amazing imagery. I really feel like I am there and have a sense of the characters through the description, Beatifully written
Comment Written 07-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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thanks so much for the kind review :)
Comment from arunkrishnan
Rating of Chapter 1 - Into the Gathering Storm
Wonderful work! The lady is sure angel than witch. Some co-incidences make a drastic change in our lives making us wonder if they were a mere coincidence. Excellent prose! Good use of adjectives that bring out more life to the scenes, and aids in visualizing the scenario easily.
reply by the author on 01-May-2012
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Wonderful work! The lady is sure angel than witch. Some co-incidences make a drastic change in our lives making us wonder if they were a mere coincidence. Excellent prose! Good use of adjectives that bring out more life to the scenes, and aids in visualizing the scenario easily.
Comment Written 01-May-2012
reply by the author on 01-May-2012
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Thank you so much for the kind words of encouragement and the generous rating.
Comment from Realist101
Rating of Chapter 1 - Into the Gathering Storm
How intriguing! She was a ghost warning him!! I am very impressed with your vivid 'showing' words. I felt the chill, the rain, and the consternation of the main character too. ") Susan
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2011
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How intriguing! She was a ghost warning him!! I am very impressed with your vivid 'showing' words. I felt the chill, the rain, and the consternation of the main character too. ") Susan
Comment Written 04-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2011
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Thanks so much, Susan. I really appreciate the great review.
Comment from Judian James
Rating of Chapter 3 - Blood and Other Ties
Hey there. I don't know how I missed this one, but when I read the announcement, I wanted to have a look at what you had submitted. Congratulations on your award. It feels good doesn't it? This is excellent and a good piece for your mini-book. "The finger resumed its journey down the length of the flap. "If I am a true Carter, it will prove what a bastard he was. If not, then I guess I'm the bastard"
excellent
reply by the author on 16-May-2011
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Hey there. I don't know how I missed this one, but when I read the announcement, I wanted to have a look at what you had submitted. Congratulations on your award. It feels good doesn't it? This is excellent and a good piece for your mini-book. "The finger resumed its journey down the length of the flap. "If I am a true Carter, it will prove what a bastard he was. If not, then I guess I'm the bastard"
excellent
Comment Written 16-May-2011
reply by the author on 16-May-2011
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Thank you so much, Jude. Yes, it feels great. It only took 4 tries :) I'm glad you enjoyed this one--is one of my personal faves.
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Oooh, ouch. I heard it could be difficult. So another congrats for persevering!!
Comment from Kokopelli
Rating of Chapter 1 - Into the Gathering Storm
Very nice. I really enjoyed it - your "words - pictures in the mind" were exceptional. I saw them both - and the follow through from the start to finish kept me engaged.
Congrats on winning the seal - as well as the other honors. The story deserves it. -- And in so few words. Great work
reply by the author on 16-May-2011
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Very nice. I really enjoyed it - your "words - pictures in the mind" were exceptional. I saw them both - and the follow through from the start to finish kept me engaged.
Congrats on winning the seal - as well as the other honors. The story deserves it. -- And in so few words. Great work
Comment Written 15-May-2011
reply by the author on 16-May-2011
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Wow, thank you so much, I'm honored by the generous rating and kind words.
Comment from JMRoland
Rating of Chapter 1 - Into the Gathering Storm
Hi redrider6612,
First of all, congratulations on the Seal of Quality. It was that announcement that led me over here to read. This is a good piece of flash fiction. It is well-conceived, with a provocative setting and interesting characters. The plot line holds tension and reader interest, and the ending is quite satisfying, and some what of a surprise, which is always desirable in a short-short. Two minor things: check the spelling of "mesmerized" in paragraph 12. Also, in paragraph 2, if you were to substitute "pistol" for "gun", it might sound better to the reader's ear, as you follow soon after with "gum boots".
Nicely done story-written on a professional level.
JMR
reply by the author on 15-May-2011
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Hi redrider6612,
First of all, congratulations on the Seal of Quality. It was that announcement that led me over here to read. This is a good piece of flash fiction. It is well-conceived, with a provocative setting and interesting characters. The plot line holds tension and reader interest, and the ending is quite satisfying, and some what of a surprise, which is always desirable in a short-short. Two minor things: check the spelling of "mesmerized" in paragraph 12. Also, in paragraph 2, if you were to substitute "pistol" for "gun", it might sound better to the reader's ear, as you follow soon after with "gum boots".
Nicely done story-written on a professional level.
JMR
Comment Written 15-May-2011
reply by the author on 15-May-2011
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Thank you for the kind congrats and the great feedback.
