Comment from KDsantiago

Excellent

Dear smurphgirl,
Your writing is very interesting. I admire your determination to take care of your mother. It is a very moving story.

A few corrections: In the first line, there should be a comma between Phoenix,Arizona.

Why is the word Moment capitalized in the third paragraph?

Also, San Miguel Allende does not have an i.

You have had a very interesting life.
KDsantiago

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 Comment Written 30-Mar-2009

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2009

Thank you very much for your kind and helpful review. Alliede is spelled with an i on the map but when I looked on the web, found you are right...no i. Thanks

Comment from WRITER1

Excellent

This sound like a wonderful place for you and your mother. A peace time to be together. Hang the rest of them. Good job on this.

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 Comment Written 30-Mar-2009

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2009

Thak you. Yes, it was a good choice for both of us.