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A Leaf on the Wind

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Autobiography of abuse

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Comment from jaeladarling
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I hate it that anyone has to go through this. I'm glad that you are able to share this and hopefully help someone down the road.

I didn't find any technical errors for this portion. Thanks so much for sharing this with us.

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2009


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2009
    Thanks. That is also my hope. I sincerely appreciate your continued interest in my bizarre, not so uplifitng biography...however, it does have a happy ending.
Comment from adewpearl
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a cruel vengeance, forcing me to relive add comma
accused me of lying, saying add comma
This chapter is so filled with despair - you portray so well how you blank out and have terrifying visions and feel so confused - this is as difficult to hear about as the rapes years before. Brooke

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 Comment Written 12-Mar-2009


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2009
    Thank you so very much for your kind wordes and coninued help. I sincerely appreciate it.
Comment from valeries26
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Poor woman. It is had to get pass what has happen to you if someone did that. I know someone who can relate, but her stepdad paid her for the "services." She couldn't have sex until she got really drunk which is sad. Good luck with the story. I saw nothing wrong with it.

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 Comment Written 12-Mar-2009


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2009
    Thank you for your kind reviw. I appreciate your comments.