A Leaf on the Wind
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Mrs. B."Autobiography of abuse
24 total reviews
Comment from Siouxsun
I was surprised at the warnings for strong language or content because I read nothing that fit that description.Seems like such a wonderful relationship for Valerie and Mrs B. but given the nature of the book I'm wondering if....
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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I was surprised at the warnings for strong language or content because I read nothing that fit that description.Seems like such a wonderful relationship for Valerie and Mrs B. but given the nature of the book I'm wondering if....
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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I don't know why it has that warning either. I will remove it.
Comment from Jade Lawson
This chapter is very well written and has many interesting facts. I enjoyed to learned the bond between Valerie and Mrs B. Really enjoyed the details of the things of they did together.
The treasure hunts sounds nice. It's a secret between them.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2013
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This chapter is very well written and has many interesting facts. I enjoyed to learned the bond between Valerie and Mrs B. Really enjoyed the details of the things of they did together.
The treasure hunts sounds nice. It's a secret between them.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2013
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Mrs. B was a delight. I loved every moment I was able to spend with her.
Comment from Gungalo
This shows that Valerie did have one good friend in Mrs. B. She promised not to tell their secret and never did. She had a new hat and loved it.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2013
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This shows that Valerie did have one good friend in Mrs. B. She promised not to tell their secret and never did. She had a new hat and loved it.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2013
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Mrs. B. what a hoot and I am sure the first and only real bag lady I ever knew. WE had such fun together.
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LOL girl.
Comment from jgirlie152
What a lovely story of your kind neighbor, Mrs. B. I wish I had had a neighbor who was so good to me. I'm sure you were an adorable child and she was the lucky one to have you for company. This is well told, in great detail, so that the reader feels they are watching from a short distance.
Joan
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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What a lovely story of your kind neighbor, Mrs. B. I wish I had had a neighbor who was so good to me. I'm sure you were an adorable child and she was the lucky one to have you for company. This is well told, in great detail, so that the reader feels they are watching from a short distance.
Joan
Comment Written 01-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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I think about her all the time. She was an odd woman but we had some terrific times together. I guess she could be thought of as the original bag lady.
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somehow I believe that small children and old people make wonderful friends.
Comment from Summer Falls
I just love Miss B. !! The adventures were a learning experience,but I can understand why she told her not to tell her mother of their treasure hunts. LOL Well done, did not see any spag.
I could just picture her wearing the pink hat with her too large boots slapping on the ground. How adorable.
Summer
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2009
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I just love Miss B. !! The adventures were a learning experience,but I can understand why she told her not to tell her mother of their treasure hunts. LOL Well done, did not see any spag.
I could just picture her wearing the pink hat with her too large boots slapping on the ground. How adorable.
Summer
Comment Written 16-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2009
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Mrs. B. is one of my fondest memories. She was just delightful.
Comment from second thought
Never did I believe a person could I so many times and still make you feel as if you part of the whole. Noble behavior and child like trust all roll in one. Joyfull.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2009
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Never did I believe a person could I so many times and still make you feel as if you part of the whole. Noble behavior and child like trust all roll in one. Joyfull.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2009
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Mrs. B. was a delightful, excentric, and charming person who brought smiles and laugher into my life.
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Correction. Our lives through you.
Comment from Belinda
I like this chapter about Valerie and Mrs. B, who seems to be a wise person and a good excample and role model for the child.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2009
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I like this chapter about Valerie and Mrs. B, who seems to be a wise person and a good excample and role model for the child.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2009
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She was a delighful, excetric, and fun woman who made me laugh.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Mrs B sounds like a wonderful who understands children. I think we all had someone like her in our lived. My neighbor lived two houses down and was a wonderful lady. I have very fond memories of her.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2009
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Mrs B sounds like a wonderful who understands children. I think we all had someone like her in our lived. My neighbor lived two houses down and was a wonderful lady. I have very fond memories of her.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2009
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She was a delightful, excentric, and loveabel woman.
Comment from maxic59
Another beautiful chapter about your childhood. My husband and I go to garage sales every week and bring home treasures, just like you did. My step son who stays odd weekends with us is abdhord that we do that. No imagination :)
well done
onya mate :)
cheers max
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2009
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Another beautiful chapter about your childhood. My husband and I go to garage sales every week and bring home treasures, just like you did. My step son who stays odd weekends with us is abdhord that we do that. No imagination :)
well done
onya mate :)
cheers max
Comment Written 28-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2009
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She was a delightful, excentric, woman who always made me laugh.
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Seeing your Seal award has made me go right back to the beginning of your book, it may take me awhile to get through, But I do like your style of writing, so honest and imaginative I say that nicely from a childs point of view, you explain it beautifully. I know it gets worse, but you have done well and with a lot of guts to share your story.
well done
have you sent it to any publishers? as it is worthy.
onya mate :)
cheers max
Comment from c_lucas
The young and the elderly should bond. The young is inquisitive and the elderly has years of experience. This is very well written
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2009
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The young and the elderly should bond. The young is inquisitive and the elderly has years of experience. This is very well written
Comment Written 28-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2009
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Wonderful, excentric, and delightful woman. Always made me smile
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I had an elderly neighbor who I remember for her generosity.
