Comment from Agissing

Exceptional

Love it too. Amazing how so much can be captured with so few words.

Love the use of the image as well, so well chosen and highly complimentary of the writing. Which came first..the Haiku or the picture!

Regards,

Andrew.

 Comment Written 06-May-2008

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reply by the author on 06-May-2008

wow! thank you so much!!!! :-D

Comment from PUPA

Excellent

Shelley, you are so right to like this haiku as it is one of the best I have read since I joined FS last July. There is beauty in each and every word that are carefully and well chosen. And the picture is just breathtaking.
Good luck in this contest.
Love
Pupa

 Comment Written 06-May-2008

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reply by the author on 06-May-2008

cool! thank you so much! :-)

Comment from ExperiencingLiphe

Excellent

I liked this one because I loved the picture but I really liked how you wrote your poem into the picture. Wonderful job. Can't wait to see more.

 Comment Written 06-May-2008

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reply by the author on 06-May-2008

thanx! :-)

Comment from Pili Pubul

Excellent

I like it too sweet shelley, the image is so comforting and beautiful. A lovely haiku , thank you so much for sharing !

glowing in the sky
a lullaby in rainbow
sun whispers goodnight)

Thank you for reviving, love it. Pili

 Comment Written 06-May-2008

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reply by the author on 06-May-2008

thank you so much for reading and reviewing! :-)

Comment from Wendyanne

Excellent

Hi Shelley. This is such a stunningly beautiful piece of poetry in haiku style. The imagery is awesome. "Sun whispers goodnight." Awesome. Good luck

 Comment Written 06-May-2008

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reply by the author on 06-May-2008

hehe thanx so much!! :-)

Comment from Adam Smith

Excellent

I really like this one too. It really sets the mood and accentuates the picture you've added. It's a good haiku and I think a fairly creative take on the form. Adam

 Comment Written 06-May-2008

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reply by the author on 06-May-2008

thanx lots! :-)

Comment from Dan Burke

Excellent

The perfect artwork for this haiku. I love this one. Your second and third lines speak volumes. I hope you do well in this contest, this is really good.

 Comment Written 06-May-2008

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reply by the author on 06-May-2008

hope so to LOL! ;-)

Comment from mmichelle97219

Excellent

I just fell in love with your second line. It packs that wow factor in it. The whole thing is pretty cool, but that last line is kick ass.
Michelle

 Comment Written 06-May-2008

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reply by the author on 06-May-2008

cool! thank you so much! :-)

Comment from BarnCat

Excellent

Shelley -- I'm glad you liked this one well enough to share. Such eloquence in so few words: a lullaby in rainbow -- lovely. Well done. DBL

 Comment Written 06-May-2008

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reply by the author on 06-May-2008

thanx so much for letting me know :-)

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Very nice shelley good syllable count and the picturre is made clear of a song in the rainbow.

Never thought of a rainblw singing a lullaby. (good LIne)
good luck
Gert

 Comment Written 06-May-2008

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reply by the author on 06-May-2008

hehe thanx so much! :-)

reply by Gert sherwood on 06-May-2008

Hope you read my reply on My poem A question to God
Smiles
Gert