Ode To A Perfect Season
Parody of Lee Greenwood's song God Bless The USA17 total reviews
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
This is a really good piece of work.
Good flow to the words, and I like the rhyme and rhythm.
Only one thing though.... You seem to have repeated some of the verses...... accidently??? Or did you do this as a kind of chorus?
Thanks for sharing.
Margaret Snowdon
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2008
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This is a really good piece of work.
Good flow to the words, and I like the rhyme and rhythm.
Only one thing though.... You seem to have repeated some of the verses...... accidently??? Or did you do this as a kind of chorus?
Thanks for sharing.
Margaret Snowdon
Comment Written 04-Feb-2008
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2008
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As a chorus. It was for a song parody contest. Thanks for the great review. :)
Comment from westwood redneck
I enjoyed the poem very much! This coming from a Patriots Fan! I am sad the Patriots lost, but the poem was very well written and no fan can deny that! Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2008
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I enjoyed the poem very much! This coming from a Patriots Fan! I am sad the Patriots lost, but the poem was very well written and no fan can deny that! Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2008
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2008
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Thanks for a kind review! Sorry about the game, in light of you being a fan. :)
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No problem, somebody had ta win! I thought Eli Manning done a great job!
Comment from S.Yocom
This is a clever song parody. Too bad that the Jags lost. It does appear that the patriots are unbeatable. Tom Brady and his compatriots have certainly had a terrific season. I like your poem and sang it in my head.
Sally
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2008
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This is a clever song parody. Too bad that the Jags lost. It does appear that the patriots are unbeatable. Tom Brady and his compatriots have certainly had a terrific season. I like your poem and sang it in my head.
Sally
Comment Written 16-Jan-2008
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2008
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Thanks Sally! :) I'm still hoping San Diego might pull off the upset of the season! lol I appreciate the review. :)
Comment from Maximilia
Good song parody... I do have one suggestion: put up in your notes the song and artist it's parodying. I happen to know it's God Bless the USA by Lee Greenwood, but not everyone will.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2008
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Good song parody... I do have one suggestion: put up in your notes the song and artist it's parodying. I happen to know it's God Bless the USA by Lee Greenwood, but not everyone will.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2008
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2008
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I already have that listed in the descriptive line at the top. :) Thanks for your review!
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
Dovey, you've done a really nice job with this piece. I have to admit, while part of me would like for the Patriots to accomplish a perfect season, I was truly hoping that the Indianapolis Colts were going to have back-to-back Super Bowl wins as I have such great respect for their coach, Tony Dungy. Now, I just don't know who to root for. I'm just so excited the Giants beat the Cowboys. Guess we'll just have to sit back and watch what happens. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2008
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Dovey, you've done a really nice job with this piece. I have to admit, while part of me would like for the Patriots to accomplish a perfect season, I was truly hoping that the Indianapolis Colts were going to have back-to-back Super Bowl wins as I have such great respect for their coach, Tony Dungy. Now, I just don't know who to root for. I'm just so excited the Giants beat the Cowboys. Guess we'll just have to sit back and watch what happens. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2008
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2008
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Thanks for your great review and good luck! :)
I too was soooo happy the Cowboys lost! I'm pulling for Green Bay so Favre can go out in style.
Comment from IndianaIrish
Hello Dovey! I agree with every word of your Pats parody! I was pulling for Jax...and then Indy let me down so much today. Sheeeeesh. None of my teams can win the big one (I'm from Buffalo lol) Best wishes to you in the contest.
Go Chargers!
Smiles,
Indy :>)
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2008
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Hello Dovey! I agree with every word of your Pats parody! I was pulling for Jax...and then Indy let me down so much today. Sheeeeesh. None of my teams can win the big one (I'm from Buffalo lol) Best wishes to you in the contest.
Go Chargers!
Smiles,
Indy :>)
Comment Written 13-Jan-2008
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2008
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thanks Indy! Goooooooo Chargers!
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thanks Indy! Goooooooo Chargers!
Comment from basic
hi
good luck in the contest
you did a great job with the song
I am not a football fan at all but I just moved
to Wisconsin and I can't go anywhere without
people bragging about the Packers and what's his name
Favre.
good job
basic
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2008
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hi
good luck in the contest
you did a great job with the song
I am not a football fan at all but I just moved
to Wisconsin and I can't go anywhere without
people bragging about the Packers and what's his name
Favre.
good job
basic
Comment Written 13-Jan-2008
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2008
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Thanks for a great review :)
Comment from Lance29
Excellent entry - looks like you are as anti-Pats as I am anti-Yankees in my entry. I am taking it the song is the Lee Greenwood song - at least that is how I read it. Although I am rooting for a perfect season - so the '72 Dolphins will REALLY have something to complain about!
Lance
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2008
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Excellent entry - looks like you are as anti-Pats as I am anti-Yankees in my entry. I am taking it the song is the Lee Greenwood song - at least that is how I read it. Although I am rooting for a perfect season - so the '72 Dolphins will REALLY have something to complain about!
Lance
Comment Written 13-Jan-2008
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2008
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I'm just tired of hearing how wonderful Tom Brady is! lol He's not THAT perfect. Thanks for a great review and good luck in the contest! :)
Comment from angel of the quill
great work
i dont watch anymore
to busy working
so i dont know who is who
or who is on what team
but
i know you brought this to life
and did a great job
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2008
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great work
i dont watch anymore
to busy working
so i dont know who is who
or who is on what team
but
i know you brought this to life
and did a great job
Comment Written 12-Jan-2008
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2008
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Thanks angel, I appreciate the review! :)
Comment from Beejay
I liked the whole concept and the presentation of your work. I'm afraid I know very little about your sport but I can feel your strength and enthusiasm for it. Well done
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2008
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I liked the whole concept and the presentation of your work. I'm afraid I know very little about your sport but I can feel your strength and enthusiasm for it. Well done
Comment Written 12-Jan-2008
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2008
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Thanks for taking the time to review my poem Beejay! :)
