The New Commandments
If I were God39 total reviews
Comment from whispersloud
That was hilarious! I really like how you put the other commandments down with a description of why you chose them. I don't really see where it needs any improvements. So good job, I really enjoyed that!
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2011
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That was hilarious! I really like how you put the other commandments down with a description of why you chose them. I don't really see where it needs any improvements. So good job, I really enjoyed that!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2011
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Thank you. I'm glad you liked it
Comment from str8nthnf8th4ever
This was a very funny poem to me and although I read it to someone else who did not get it, it was hilarious to me. I agree to more commandments because it is so much more to bear these days than when Moses was around, I think, I guess, yeah, it is. Good work
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2011
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This was a very funny poem to me and although I read it to someone else who did not get it, it was hilarious to me. I agree to more commandments because it is so much more to bear these days than when Moses was around, I think, I guess, yeah, it is. Good work
Comment Written 01-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2011
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Thank you. I'm glad you liked it
Comment from gaelicgem
This story is very funny, I think that I can agree to about 90% of your new commandments (only because I live in the country and most of the other ones don't really affect me).
Very well written, I enjoyed it very much.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2011
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This story is very funny, I think that I can agree to about 90% of your new commandments (only because I live in the country and most of the other ones don't really affect me).
Very well written, I enjoyed it very much.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2011
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Thanks. I'm a country boy at heart, but I work mainly in the city. I'm glad you found it funny
Comment from Hanna Marie
LOL,you have goo be a blat to be around!!! Very well said. I so enjoyed this piece.
I bet God would like to change or add a few things to the list as well.
Keep up your writings.I look forward to reading more. Blessings
Hanna Mari
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2010
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LOL,you have goo be a blat to be around!!! Very well said. I so enjoyed this piece.
I bet God would like to change or add a few things to the list as well.
Keep up your writings.I look forward to reading more. Blessings
Hanna Mari
Comment Written 07-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2010
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You're very kind. I'm glad you liked it
Comment from IrisD
I truly enjoyed this piece. I live in the country, 40 miles from a capital city, but I visit DC once a year and understand exactly what you are saying. I could just imagine you getting the shaft from an umbrella.
Cell phones in the checkout or on the metro are a problem as we do get way too much info. You have a way of making this very funny, and I applaud you.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2010
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I truly enjoyed this piece. I live in the country, 40 miles from a capital city, but I visit DC once a year and understand exactly what you are saying. I could just imagine you getting the shaft from an umbrella.
Cell phones in the checkout or on the metro are a problem as we do get way too much info. You have a way of making this very funny, and I applaud you.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2010
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You're very kind, thank you. I'm glad you liked it
Comment from Arabellah
OK I have to say this way really funny!
I loved....
Thou shalt not wear Lycra after the age of twenty three.
and
Thou shalt not erect an umbrella within the confines of a city.
Keep it up!
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2010
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OK I have to say this way really funny!
I loved....
Thou shalt not wear Lycra after the age of twenty three.
and
Thou shalt not erect an umbrella within the confines of a city.
Keep it up!
Comment Written 01-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2010
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You're very kind, thank you. I'm glad it gave you a laugh
Comment from MAMONIA
This was great! I enjoyed every syllable and every word was hysterical. If you were God, there would be alot of impatience going around, and where I'm from, I heard that God has much patience with his humans. It is called unconditional love even though we try his patience any way we can. I don't think your commandments would be followed as carefully as the one on the Tablet Moses held. For the same reason, I think you tickled my funny bone in places I didn't know existed. Great job!
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2010
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This was great! I enjoyed every syllable and every word was hysterical. If you were God, there would be alot of impatience going around, and where I'm from, I heard that God has much patience with his humans. It is called unconditional love even though we try his patience any way we can. I don't think your commandments would be followed as carefully as the one on the Tablet Moses held. For the same reason, I think you tickled my funny bone in places I didn't know existed. Great job!
Comment Written 02-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2010
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Thank you. It wasn't a great theologiacl treatise, and I think God probably had longer to think about His. Besides, He went first and got all the good ones.
Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from Iwish
What a way to vent! I love this format. Works for me. We all have a rant and things to get off our chest - but this just takes the cake - humour, and lots of it.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2010
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What a way to vent! I love this format. Works for me. We all have a rant and things to get off our chest - but this just takes the cake - humour, and lots of it.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2010
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You're very kind, thank you. Today in the city people were walking around with open umbrellas and it wasn't even raining. Grrrrr.
Thanks for the review and your generous score.
Comment from ladyscarlet
This is AWESOME! I love to laugh, and this did just that, a lot in fact. It was brilliant! Very well thought out. I can imagine you had some of these ideas tucked away in the back of your mind and when you had the chance to get them all down at the same time everything flowed like a river.
Awesome job!
God Bless,
~LadyScarlet
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2009
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This is AWESOME! I love to laugh, and this did just that, a lot in fact. It was brilliant! Very well thought out. I can imagine you had some of these ideas tucked away in the back of your mind and when you had the chance to get them all down at the same time everything flowed like a river.
Awesome job!
God Bless,
~LadyScarlet
Comment Written 01-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2009
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Haha, how come you know me so well? Yes, when I get into rant mode there's no stopping me. Thanks for the wonderful review
Comment from BPL76
the play on the commandments is wonderful But as a humor you could make it better. More detail on your thoughts
This will make it more enjoyable . I did not find it offensive in the general aspect of the storyline
Good job
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2009
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the play on the commandments is wonderful But as a humor you could make it better. More detail on your thoughts
This will make it more enjoyable . I did not find it offensive in the general aspect of the storyline
Good job
Comment Written 17-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2009
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Thank you. I'm glad it wasn't offensive
