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Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "prehistoric peace"keep your hope alive....
15 total reviews
Comment from SunlitWhisper
how very nice that you've won these contests. Excellent tanka so I know i'm late with the Congratulations but just wanted to pass it on.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2008
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how very nice that you've won these contests. Excellent tanka so I know i'm late with the Congratulations but just wanted to pass it on.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2008
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than kyou so much! :-D
Comment from Focused True North
Hi Shelley, I'm sorry I missed this when the contest was running and I'm absolutely thrilled to find out you won!!!!!! Super Yeah!!!!!!!
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2007
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Hi Shelley, I'm sorry I missed this when the contest was running and I'm absolutely thrilled to find out you won!!!!!! Super Yeah!!!!!!!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2007
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2007
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i know!
i still have the "Contest Prize" pm in my messages LOL!
Comment from rhymerfortyniner
I like this tanka, with its theme of simple times and peace on Earth. Excellent imagery and perfect syllabic count. All the best in winning the contest. Verna
reply by the author on 12-May-2007
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I like this tanka, with its theme of simple times and peace on Earth. Excellent imagery and perfect syllabic count. All the best in winning the contest. Verna
Comment Written 12-May-2007
reply by the author on 12-May-2007
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thank you so much :-)
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You're welcome. Verna
Comment from C.Jean
Basic survival needs--yes, we have so much more than what we 'need' now. It was indeed a simpler time when the only things available were the necessities, now we are inundated with too many 'wants'.
A nice tanka, perfect form.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-May-2007
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Basic survival needs--yes, we have so much more than what we 'need' now. It was indeed a simpler time when the only things available were the necessities, now we are inundated with too many 'wants'.
A nice tanka, perfect form.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-May-2007
reply by the author on 12-May-2007
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lol
thanx lots :-)
Comment from Julie G
A most poetic tanka. Food for thought, going way back to organisms, a time when engagement was for survival pure and simple, not war for power or wealth. Deeper meaning to this than meets the eye. What a tanka should do. Illuminate. Great job.
Julie G
reply by the author on 12-May-2007
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A most poetic tanka. Food for thought, going way back to organisms, a time when engagement was for survival pure and simple, not war for power or wealth. Deeper meaning to this than meets the eye. What a tanka should do. Illuminate. Great job.
Julie G
Comment Written 12-May-2007
reply by the author on 12-May-2007
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thank you so much :-)
Comment from RenieReader
You've definitely given me food for thought, shelley kaye. Did they inhabit the earth in peace or was it a survival of the fittest? I don't know, I wasn't there. Your well chosen words sure put some visions in my mind, though. Good job.
Renie
reply by the author on 12-May-2007
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You've definitely given me food for thought, shelley kaye. Did they inhabit the earth in peace or was it a survival of the fittest? I don't know, I wasn't there. Your well chosen words sure put some visions in my mind, though. Good job.
Renie
Comment Written 12-May-2007
reply by the author on 12-May-2007
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maybe a little of both lol
thanx lots :-)
Comment from Gresenle
Shelley, good to-the-point tanka with a nice tone. The only change I would make is that "survival needs" might flow better than "needs survival."
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-May-2007
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Shelley, good to-the-point tanka with a nice tone. The only change I would make is that "survival needs" might flow better than "needs survival."
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-May-2007
reply by the author on 11-May-2007
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hmm good point
will check it out
thanx lots :-)
Comment from samandlancelot
Creative approach and picture. Organisms that we cannot see, yet evidence of something made by humans existing in your photo.
In Jesus' Name,
Patricia
reply by the author on 11-May-2007
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Creative approach and picture. Organisms that we cannot see, yet evidence of something made by humans existing in your photo.
In Jesus' Name,
Patricia
Comment Written 11-May-2007
reply by the author on 11-May-2007
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thank you so much :-)
Comment from Teri7
This is a very good entry you have written. It is full of great wording and I liked the picture you chose. Very good work. God bless and good luck. Hugs, Teri
reply by the author on 11-May-2007
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This is a very good entry you have written. It is full of great wording and I liked the picture you chose. Very good work. God bless and good luck. Hugs, Teri
Comment Written 11-May-2007
reply by the author on 11-May-2007
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thank you so much! :-)
Comment from Josipher32
This was a perfectly written tanka format poem with an exact syllable count. Perfect picture and color scheme choice for the poetry content.
reply by the author on 02-May-2007
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This was a perfectly written tanka format poem with an exact syllable count. Perfect picture and color scheme choice for the poetry content.
Comment Written 02-May-2007
reply by the author on 02-May-2007
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thank you so much! :-)
