My Favorite Place
An almost perfect sunrise.35 total reviews
Comment from Sanku
I enjoyed reading this .You have described the dawn very well that one can easily understand this is your fav. spot. You have familiarised with your avian friends and they all perhaps know that you have been a teacher Hence the regular attendance giving...
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2025
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I enjoyed reading this .You have described the dawn very well that one can easily understand this is your fav. spot. You have familiarised with your avian friends and they all perhaps know that you have been a teacher Hence the regular attendance giving...
Comment Written 15-Jun-2025
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2025
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Thank you for the wonderful support.
Comment from Mistydawn
I thought this was a wonderful story. So well-written, and your great description made us feel like we were right there with you. Your backyard sounds like a very beautiful, but busy place. Thankyou for sharing this with us.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2025
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I thought this was a wonderful story. So well-written, and your great description made us feel like we were right there with you. Your backyard sounds like a very beautiful, but busy place. Thankyou for sharing this with us.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2025
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2025
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Thank you for the support. I appreciate it.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Barbara,
This almost sounds like words for a meditation recording. All we needed was the gentle music. Wow, great way to usher in contentment and peace. So needed these days, or at least my days, is taking that time to enjoy the beauty of life and God's gifts.
Hugs,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2025
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Barbara,
This almost sounds like words for a meditation recording. All we needed was the gentle music. Wow, great way to usher in contentment and peace. So needed these days, or at least my days, is taking that time to enjoy the beauty of life and God's gifts.
Hugs,
Rhonda
Comment Written 12-Jun-2025
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2025
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Thank you for the support.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Isn't it nice to be able to use Tim's prompts to change from usual fiction writing to non-fiction (or the reverse depending on the person). Lets us look at structure and rules from a different angle. You did really well. I especially liked your description of your pets. kay
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2025
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Isn't it nice to be able to use Tim's prompts to change from usual fiction writing to non-fiction (or the reverse depending on the person). Lets us look at structure and rules from a different angle. You did really well. I especially liked your description of your pets. kay
Comment Written 12-Jun-2025
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2025
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Thank you for the support. Tim wasn't kind.
Comment from Paul McFarland
Our backyards are quite similar, though yours is in Texas and mine is in Maine. We get to see the sun before anyone else in the U. S. It comes up here out of the ocean.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2025
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Our backyards are quite similar, though yours is in Texas and mine is in Maine. We get to see the sun before anyone else in the U. S. It comes up here out of the ocean.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2025
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2025
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Thank you for the support.
Comment from Douglas Goff
Had to six star this one as well.
Number One: it sure was purty
Number Two: it is at number three this month and should be number one.
You are a talent, Barbara.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2025
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Had to six star this one as well.
Number One: it sure was purty
Number Two: it is at number three this month and should be number one.
You are a talent, Barbara.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2025
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2025
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Thank you for your wonderful support.
Comment from Brenda Strauser
This is a beautiful.poem. I really enjoyed reading this. I love to watch the birds in the morning too. Your story is well written and tge descriptions are great. I'm writing a story for the club too. I have to go over it again. I wish I could wrote like you. Well done, Brenda
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2025
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This is a beautiful.poem. I really enjoyed reading this. I love to watch the birds in the morning too. Your story is well written and tge descriptions are great. I'm writing a story for the club too. I have to go over it again. I wish I could wrote like you. Well done, Brenda
Comment Written 11-Jun-2025
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2025
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Thank you for the support. Tim didn't like it.
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Are you kidding? I thought it was excellent. He probably wont' like mine either. I'm tired of editing it. I'll probably post it tomorrow.
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Did he actually tell you he didn't like it.
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Go ahead and post. I'm positive it's great!!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your story felt like a warm morning hug! I loved how you made everyday moments like making tea feel so special and full of life. Your calm and thankful tone gave me a peaceful feeling. It was a reminder to appreciate simple joys.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2025
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Your story felt like a warm morning hug! I loved how you made everyday moments like making tea feel so special and full of life. Your calm and thankful tone gave me a peaceful feeling. It was a reminder to appreciate simple joys.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2025
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2025
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Thank you for the support.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
I don't think Tim will find as much wrong with this as you anticipate. The descriptions are lovely and realistic. Sounds like a wonderful place to call home.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2025
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I don't think Tim will find as much wrong with this as you anticipate. The descriptions are lovely and realistic. Sounds like a wonderful place to call home.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2025
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2025
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Tim chewed it up. LOL Thank you for the support.
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oh dear. lol Well at least we know we're getting an honest report lol
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true
Comment from Mrs Anna Howard
I think this is very cute! I love the conversation between you and Harley. I think the way you described the scenes of your garden is well done. I feel like I'm transported there.
Of course , I am not Tim lol. English is not even my first language. However, I enjoyed reading your work so thank you for posting!
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2025
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I think this is very cute! I love the conversation between you and Harley. I think the way you described the scenes of your garden is well done. I feel like I'm transported there.
Of course , I am not Tim lol. English is not even my first language. However, I enjoyed reading your work so thank you for posting!
Comment Written 10-Jun-2025
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2025
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Thank you for the support.
