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Poetic justice

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Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Jim
This is a humorous view of what we do at fanstory. Not all people are pulled in by the poems on the home screen which give the most member dollars (bribe). I have been known to review poems with only 2 member cents, as I am doing here. Honesty in reviews is what we all need to become better writers.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day.
Joan

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2025

Comment from kahpot
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Ha! Ha! yes, sometimes reviewing is hard, and sometimes when I review I ask questions in hope of a better understanding, low and behold the author does not respond, an excellent 3 line poem, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2025

Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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This is a great 3 line poem. It is short, but the words speak at a loud volume. They pretty much tell a truth that no one wants to admit.

Well done and good luck in the contest

Cecilia

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2025

Comment from patcelaw
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This is very well written for the three poetry contest. I wish you the very best in the contest and may you have a lovely day. May God bless you and give you the desires of your heart. Patricia.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2025

Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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Your poem feels sharp. You made me think about how much we all want real feedback - not just flattery. I thought this was very creative and you say a lot with just three lines!

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2025

Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I loved this clever post as we are drawn in by the thought of earning dollars and we hope to offer some honesty in our reviews! I enjoyed the process here and I hope I followed your rules! Love Dolly x

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2025

Comment from Tim Margetts
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This little jab has sharp teeth - and it grins while it bites. The first line, "a bribe pulled you in," is a knowing wink at the site's reward mechanics, and the tone is clear: amused, a bit jaded, and not entirely unjustified.
The second line shifts from accusation to process: "words count so you tot them up" - mechanical, almost pitiful in its honesty. It's both a description and a critique, delivered in plain language that mimics the very kind of transactional reviewing it skewers.
The third line closes it neatly with a smirk: "an honest review." It's unclear whether this is what was offered or what's being questioned - and that ambiguity is the poem's quiet strength.
This is poetry with a raised eyebrow. Minimalist, pointed, and quietly damning - poetic justice indeed.
Tim

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2025