Her Hand
a quatern poem34 total reviews
Comment from Aiona
What an interesting poem structure. Thank you for sharing an example with us. It's a moving poem, and I think you used the repeating line well in it. Even though there's no rhyme scheme, it feels like there's a rhythm to the poem, perhaps because each line has a similar number of feet.
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What an interesting poem structure. Thank you for sharing an example with us. It's a moving poem, and I think you used the repeating line well in it. Even though there's no rhyme scheme, it feels like there's a rhythm to the poem, perhaps because each line has a similar number of feet.
Comment Written 19-May-2025
Comment from bob cullen
Such a delightful and beautiful message. Love can be described in many ways, but not many would have the sincerity of this poem. Your words really do flow delightfully, and I'm sure there's a message similar to this coming from above.
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Such a delightful and beautiful message. Love can be described in many ways, but not many would have the sincerity of this poem. Your words really do flow delightfully, and I'm sure there's a message similar to this coming from above.
Comment Written 17-May-2025
Comment from Justin Slone
Very heartfelt and full of emotion. This was well written and carries a lot of weight.
It's subtly hints at a passing but you don't quite know until the middle where it pops out
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Very heartfelt and full of emotion. This was well written and carries a lot of weight.
It's subtly hints at a passing but you don't quite know until the middle where it pops out
Comment Written 16-May-2025
Comment from Teri7
Jim, I know it has to be hard on you. You must miss her so very much. This is a very well written quatern poem about your love and missing her so. Thank you for sharing. lovely imagery from the artwork you chose. Blessings, Teri
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Jim, I know it has to be hard on you. You must miss her so very much. This is a very well written quatern poem about your love and missing her so. Thank you for sharing. lovely imagery from the artwork you chose. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 15-May-2025
Comment from Douglas Goff
This is a very sad piece. I like the added impact of repeating the first stanza as the last. Powerful!
Very enjoyable, Jim. Keep up the most excellent work!
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This is a very sad piece. I like the added impact of repeating the first stanza as the last. Powerful!
Very enjoyable, Jim. Keep up the most excellent work!
😎
Comment Written 15-May-2025
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Jim,
This is a great poem. It is full of love and you can feel it oozing off the page. It is sad when a loved one dies and we are left behind. We know we will meet again in God's house when we all get there.
Well done
Cecilia
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Jim,
This is a great poem. It is full of love and you can feel it oozing off the page. It is sad when a loved one dies and we are left behind. We know we will meet again in God's house when we all get there.
Well done
Cecilia
Comment Written 15-May-2025
Comment from Janet Foor
A beautiful and heartfelt poem Jim. The repeating line is haunting and dra a the reader into your world of loss.
I dread the day this becomes a reality of me as well.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 15-May-2025
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A beautiful and heartfelt poem Jim. The repeating line is haunting and dra a the reader into your world of loss.
I dread the day this becomes a reality of me as well.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 15-May-2025
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Comment from Kirsten Shonle
This is a nice pen about grief. I love the repeated line "I reach for a hand that's not there," it really moves the poem. Te descriptions you used are very well written. I enjoyed the read.
reply by the author on 15-May-2025
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This is a nice pen about grief. I love the repeated line "I reach for a hand that's not there," it really moves the poem. Te descriptions you used are very well written. I enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 15-May-2025
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Comment from evilynne
This is a very sad poem, a tribute to a loved one who is very much missed. It is well written and touches the heart. The poetic form used is well explained in the author's note. Evi
reply by the author on 15-May-2025
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This is a very sad poem, a tribute to a loved one who is very much missed. It is well written and touches the heart. The poetic form used is well explained in the author's note. Evi
Comment Written 15-May-2025
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Comment from BethShelby
This is an excellent poem that expresses loneliness and love that never fades. We miss our loved one but we know in the end everthint we lost will be restored. I enjoyed you quatern poem.
reply by the author on 15-May-2025
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This is an excellent poem that expresses loneliness and love that never fades. We miss our loved one but we know in the end everthint we lost will be restored. I enjoyed you quatern poem.
Comment Written 15-May-2025
reply by the author on 15-May-2025
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