Happy Harvey
A poem for children15 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are detailed, descriptive and creative. The poem
flows and connects well. The poem was interesting and kept the
reader looking forward to each stanza. The artwork is awesome and compliments this poem well. Great Poem!
reply by the author on 12-May-2025
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The author's words are detailed, descriptive and creative. The poem
flows and connects well. The poem was interesting and kept the
reader looking forward to each stanza. The artwork is awesome and compliments this poem well. Great Poem!
Comment Written 11-May-2025
reply by the author on 12-May-2025
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Thank you for your review and comments.
Comment from LJbutterfly
I love the story of two animals, not necessarily friends, enjoying the garden in their own way. I also liked the educational use of a variety of descriptive words to augment young learner's vocabulary. This is a delightful story. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-May-2025
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I love the story of two animals, not necessarily friends, enjoying the garden in their own way. I also liked the educational use of a variety of descriptive words to augment young learner's vocabulary. This is a delightful story. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 11-May-2025
reply by the author on 12-May-2025
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Thank you for your kind validation, your and review and well wishes!
Comment from evilynne
That is a great poem for kids with a bunny and a dog co-inhabiting the garden peacefully. It is well written and the picture is cute. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Evi
reply by the author on 11-May-2025
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That is a great poem for kids with a bunny and a dog co-inhabiting the garden peacefully. It is well written and the picture is cute. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Evi
Comment Written 10-May-2025
reply by the author on 11-May-2025
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Evi, thank you for your review and comments.
Comment from Kirsten Shonle
This reminds me of Beatrix Potter. It is a lovely poem for a child to read. This poem told a whole story. It's great. Glad Harvey knew how to stay away from the dog. I enjoyed the read.
reply by the author on 11-May-2025
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This reminds me of Beatrix Potter. It is a lovely poem for a child to read. This poem told a whole story. It's great. Glad Harvey knew how to stay away from the dog. I enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 10-May-2025
reply by the author on 11-May-2025
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Kirsten, thank you for your review and comments.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I immediately recalled owning a per rabbit my dad rescue from the R.R. tracks one night. We named it Johnie Darc, who escaped his pen and ran below a fence guarded by a security man who took him home and fed himself on my lost fur-baby. I wish it would have found Puggrub, instead.
reply by the author on 10-May-2025
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I immediately recalled owning a per rabbit my dad rescue from the R.R. tracks one night. We named it Johnie Darc, who escaped his pen and ran below a fence guarded by a security man who took him home and fed himself on my lost fur-baby. I wish it would have found Puggrub, instead.
Comment Written 09-May-2025
reply by the author on 10-May-2025
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That is a great tal Tom! I see a writing in the future to expand on this one. Thanks, Jim
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I was to young, liikely 5-7 so recollection is unclear, but I have one pending about a fish. To be posted on its own if a challenge is not soon forthcoming.
Comment from Karen Cherry
Lovely poem and picture. However, it seems too grown up for a child. M.O.M. ( My Opinion Only). Where does the name Puggrub come from? I have never heard it before, but it is very descriptive. I enjoyed the poem. Karen
reply by the author on 10-May-2025
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Lovely poem and picture. However, it seems too grown up for a child. M.O.M. ( My Opinion Only). Where does the name Puggrub come from? I have never heard it before, but it is very descriptive. I enjoyed the poem. Karen
Comment Written 09-May-2025
reply by the author on 10-May-2025
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Karen, thanks for your M.O.M. I think perhaps that I am calling out the little child in us more mature humanoids.
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That should have been. M.O.O.
I liked your poem just fine. Karen
Comment from royowen
What a delightful story/poem about two animals, on a bulldog and the a rabbit called Harvey, the namesake of another rabbit called Harvey, who was a giant imaginary rabbit friend in a film who lived many years ago, beautifully written Jim, welcome back, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 10-May-2025
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What a delightful story/poem about two animals, on a bulldog and the a rabbit called Harvey, the namesake of another rabbit called Harvey, who was a giant imaginary rabbit friend in a film who lived many years ago, beautifully written Jim, welcome back, blessings Roy
Comment Written 09-May-2025
reply by the author on 10-May-2025
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Thanks, friend~
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Welcome
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Welcome
Comment from patcelaw
This is a nicely written for him for children, and I very much enjoyed listening to it. Your presentation is done very well and your wording is exactly what a child would need to read and enjoy.
reply by the author on 10-May-2025
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This is a nicely written for him for children, and I very much enjoyed listening to it. Your presentation is done very well and your wording is exactly what a child would need to read and enjoy.
Comment Written 09-May-2025
reply by the author on 10-May-2025
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Thanks much!
Comment from Jacquelyn Popp
This is a cute and great story for children. The poem flows well and is an enjoyable read. It's an excellent contest entry. I liked the picture that you have to go with your poem. Excellent poem. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-May-2025
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This is a cute and great story for children. The poem flows well and is an enjoyable read. It's an excellent contest entry. I liked the picture that you have to go with your poem. Excellent poem. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 09-May-2025
reply by the author on 10-May-2025
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My sincere thanks!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am pretty sure this farmer isn't happy that Harvey got into his vegetables, but it does make for a cute contest entry. I'm curious what age group of children are you thinking about for this entry. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 09-May-2025
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I am pretty sure this farmer isn't happy that Harvey got into his vegetables, but it does make for a cute contest entry. I'm curious what age group of children are you thinking about for this entry. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 09-May-2025
reply by the author on 09-May-2025
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Perhaps, grades 1-3?
