Oh Life!
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Comment from Eunice Amero
Very good poem. I agree with you. There is only one God and one mediator between God and man the Man Christ Jesus. Thank you for sharing your work. I wish you all the best and keep up the good work.
I feel better today. Sorry for the last review.
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Very good poem. I agree with you. There is only one God and one mediator between God and man the Man Christ Jesus. Thank you for sharing your work. I wish you all the best and keep up the good work.
I feel better today. Sorry for the last review.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2021
Comment from CP!
This was an interesting and very good poem. However, it did have some spelling mistakes that you might want to fix. Overall, I think that this was a great poem!
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2021
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This was an interesting and very good poem. However, it did have some spelling mistakes that you might want to fix. Overall, I think that this was a great poem!
Comment Written 14-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2021
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Thank you. If you wish to help, please clarify.
Comment from Janetsue
The true meaning of a good life is one that centers upon appreciation and love of our Creator God. He proves His own love for us every day...even to those who do not know or respect Him. Sadly, too many do not recognize it. Prayer is a powerful tool and hope for a perfect afterlife remains alive and possible for everyone until the last breath of someone who is only self-focused. Thank you for sharing your poetic works.
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The true meaning of a good life is one that centers upon appreciation and love of our Creator God. He proves His own love for us every day...even to those who do not know or respect Him. Sadly, too many do not recognize it. Prayer is a powerful tool and hope for a perfect afterlife remains alive and possible for everyone until the last breath of someone who is only self-focused. Thank you for sharing your poetic works.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2021
Comment from rspoet
Hello Alcreator,
It's a brave new world man creates, sans omniscience, omnipotence,
even simple insight. Alas, man will never advance because he doesn't
learn from the past.
Did God create man in His own image, or man create God in his own image?
God is either shaking his head in dismay, or busy in some other part of the universe.
Well said.
Best wishes.
Robert
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Hello Alcreator,
It's a brave new world man creates, sans omniscience, omnipotence,
even simple insight. Alas, man will never advance because he doesn't
learn from the past.
Did God create man in His own image, or man create God in his own image?
God is either shaking his head in dismay, or busy in some other part of the universe.
Well said.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 12-Jun-2021
Comment from kahpot
Mankind is what God made it/us and in that the need to achieve the best/highest we can, this is a very interesting read, thank you for sharing this ****kahpot
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Mankind is what God made it/us and in that the need to achieve the best/highest we can, this is a very interesting read, thank you for sharing this ****kahpot
Comment Written 11-Jun-2021
Comment from Janice Canerdy
I definitely see dry humor, irony, in this piece. Yes, mankind is supposed to be so civilized, so cultured. We have SO many intellectuaals with so many degrees. Yet sometimes our behavior doesn't measure up to what human behavior should be.
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I definitely see dry humor, irony, in this piece. Yes, mankind is supposed to be so civilized, so cultured. We have SO many intellectuaals with so many degrees. Yet sometimes our behavior doesn't measure up to what human behavior should be.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2021
Comment from Erika Seshadri
This is a very interesting poem about how "shouldn't man achieve human rank status". As if, by explaination and interpretation one is to find higher calling than animals. Also, to examine the way things are and the way things should be, and how we are led in life to our future.
An extremely thought-provoking piece. One of a kind.
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This is a very interesting poem about how "shouldn't man achieve human rank status". As if, by explaination and interpretation one is to find higher calling than animals. Also, to examine the way things are and the way things should be, and how we are led in life to our future.
An extremely thought-provoking piece. One of a kind.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2021
Comment from Ulla
Hi there, I'm not always sure I understand what you're saying in your poems, but then again they always give me food for thought. Thanks also for your notes. They do help a lot. All the best, Ulla:)))
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Hi there, I'm not always sure I understand what you're saying in your poems, but then again they always give me food for thought. Thanks also for your notes. They do help a lot. All the best, Ulla:)))
Comment Written 11-Jun-2021
Comment from Eternal Muse
This is a very deep thought-pondering verse with a good spiritual message. I appreciate all the author notes and scriptural references.
Nice imagery and presentation.
Thank you for sharing your work.
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This is a very deep thought-pondering verse with a good spiritual message. I appreciate all the author notes and scriptural references.
Nice imagery and presentation.
Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2021
Comment from Sherry Asbury
This is a story I must think about - am not sure I understand the concept.
I am a simple woman who believes God is the infinite Creator of all things. You have a very complex mind and present things to consider and contemplate ... You have written this well and I shall reread this several times to absorb your meanings.
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This is a story I must think about - am not sure I understand the concept.
I am a simple woman who believes God is the infinite Creator of all things. You have a very complex mind and present things to consider and contemplate ... You have written this well and I shall reread this several times to absorb your meanings.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2021
