O My God and Mother Nature!
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Sunray"Appreciation of God and Mother Nature
74 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
I found the read of this poem engaging, uplifting, colorful, and creative.
Thank you for the author's notes. I pondered on the words and theme
of this poem and found God and nature so well defined. The artwork
is lovely and compliments these words. Hope you are doing well....Maria
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I found the read of this poem engaging, uplifting, colorful, and creative.
Thank you for the author's notes. I pondered on the words and theme
of this poem and found God and nature so well defined. The artwork
is lovely and compliments these words. Hope you are doing well....Maria
Comment Written 24-Jun-2021
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Sunray
by Alcreator Litt Dear
Your poem flows well. It draws on emotions and it presents strong images. good syllables count and connection between lines.
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Sunray
by Alcreator Litt Dear
Your poem flows well. It draws on emotions and it presents strong images. good syllables count and connection between lines.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2021
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is much light and positivity in these words and I enjoyed the sunshine as the sun rises and brings happiness to our day, a fine hopeful write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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There is much light and positivity in these words and I enjoyed the sunshine as the sun rises and brings happiness to our day, a fine hopeful write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Jun-2021
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Well written. I like it. Excellent work! Thank you for sharing!
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I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Well written. I like it. Excellent work! Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 22-Jun-2021
Comment from royowen
The thing I love about the Dawn or the new morning is that the "mercies of God are new every morning". And in life it's good to know that every day is a new day, a fresh start for us. Well done, blessings Roy
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The thing I love about the Dawn or the new morning is that the "mercies of God are new every morning". And in life it's good to know that every day is a new day, a fresh start for us. Well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-Jun-2021
Comment from kiwigirl2821
I like this one but I did not understand the comparisons you make within the piece.
"Noon tells His Gift, blooms sun full, I hay; dusk takes notes, flows life."
Feels strong yet I'm not sure what you meant...take care xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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I like this one but I did not understand the comparisons you make within the piece.
"Noon tells His Gift, blooms sun full, I hay; dusk takes notes, flows life."
Feels strong yet I'm not sure what you meant...take care xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR THIS REVIEW.
Comment from dannyleonn
Illustrious vision.
"Hearts dance, flash red rose.
Morn spreads bird wings, sky high aims."
Splendid!
A welcomed piece on this chilly evening. It warms my heart.
What a gift you have!
Thank you for sharing.
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Illustrious vision.
"Hearts dance, flash red rose.
Morn spreads bird wings, sky high aims."
Splendid!
A welcomed piece on this chilly evening. It warms my heart.
What a gift you have!
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from muezza56
another well crafted poem in the authors own style, a nice bright and breezy poem with some good imagery good accompanying pic
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another well crafted poem in the authors own style, a nice bright and breezy poem with some good imagery good accompanying pic
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from Creative77
What a beautiful piece of work. I especially love the vivid descriptions in the first stanza. Your words flow so nicely. Great job!
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What a beautiful piece of work. I especially love the vivid descriptions in the first stanza. Your words flow so nicely. Great job!
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from EMB
This poem is one of terrific celebration, and it's a sharp contrast to some of the other ones you've listed in this book. I really like the festive mood of this one.
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This poem is one of terrific celebration, and it's a sharp contrast to some of the other ones you've listed in this book. I really like the festive mood of this one.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
