Romance on the Beach
a dodoitsu poem54 total reviews
Comment from Regina Elliott
Hi dearest friend, a gorgeous
dodoitsu eventide poem. So
romantic and dreamy, nicely
penned. The artwork is dazzling too. You are one of
the best! Happy Monday :)
Love you, Regina
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Hi dearest friend, a gorgeous
dodoitsu eventide poem. So
romantic and dreamy, nicely
penned. The artwork is dazzling too. You are one of
the best! Happy Monday :)
Love you, Regina
Comment Written 10-Feb-2025
Comment from Dr. Nad
It didn't take you long to get right to the point and I like the point you got to. Let's swim in the stars. You've given us a beautiful beach scene with a wonderful picture you have painted with our minds eye. Job well done sis.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2025
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It didn't take you long to get right to the point and I like the point you got to. Let's swim in the stars. You've given us a beautiful beach scene with a wonderful picture you have painted with our minds eye. Job well done sis.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2025
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I'm glad you liked this one, Dan. It is a little out of the norm for me, but that was kind of fun. Thanks so much for the stars too, dear bro.
Lotsa love, Debi
Comment from Mrs Anna Howard
**sigh** This poem got me swooning like a teenager (I'm not) and wanting to go outside and swim in this frigid cold winter- lol. Well written! Thank you so much for sharing!
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2025
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**sigh** This poem got me swooning like a teenager (I'm not) and wanting to go outside and swim in this frigid cold winter- lol. Well written! Thank you so much for sharing!
Comment Written 08-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2025
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Hi Anna, thank you so very much for this lovely review and the kind words. Yeah, LOL, it took me back to a younger age just writing it. But it was fun to pretend. Haha. Thanks again, my new friend. Love, Debi
Comment from NanaGaye
Of course this needs a six star reward beautiful words with correct syllabi and beautiful picture, of course the lovers would have to have a swim.I need to have a swim on such a hot humid day in our land 'Down Under' All the best NanaGaye
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2025
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Of course this needs a six star reward beautiful words with correct syllabi and beautiful picture, of course the lovers would have to have a swim.I need to have a swim on such a hot humid day in our land 'Down Under' All the best NanaGaye
Comment Written 07-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2025
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Hello Gaye, you are such a sweet friend. Thank you ever so much for the kindest review and most considerate words. Also for the honor of your six stars. Thank you again, my dear, dear friend! Love, Debi
PS, how is your husband doing?
Comment from The Winter Bard
I wasn't familiar with this form of poetry before so I'm grateful I now am. And grateful for your poem which is so evocative. Lovely sentiment and lovely imagery combined.
Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2025
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I wasn't familiar with this form of poetry before so I'm grateful I now am. And grateful for your poem which is so evocative. Lovely sentiment and lovely imagery combined.
Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 06-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2025
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Dear Winter Bard, you are so very kind. I appreciate your lovely review more than you know. Thanks again, my wonderful friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Aussie
It's you a dodo? You know I can't help myself. I wish you mush luck (cough) in the Zen Poem event. With a short splash on a beach you dash, dancing in the stars you find your love. The Japanese are short in stature, short on poems and short of money. K XX
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2025
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It's you a dodo? You know I can't help myself. I wish you mush luck (cough) in the Zen Poem event. With a short splash on a beach you dash, dancing in the stars you find your love. The Japanese are short in stature, short on poems and short of money. K XX
Comment Written 06-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2025
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Kace, as always you are so crazy fun. I appreciate your fun review more than you know. Thanks again, my wonderful friend for the sweet six stars and for being so sweet yourself. Love, Debi
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Boo,Hoo Ho, I can't be sweet, I'm a diabetic!
Comment from Bill Schott
This dodoitsu, Romance on the Beach, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that the spiritual realms that are exposed to us through the water and sky are available for us to ponder.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2025
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This dodoitsu, Romance on the Beach, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that the spiritual realms that are exposed to us through the water and sky are available for us to ponder.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2025
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Thanks Bill for the awesome review and for all the kind words, my dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
Such a beautiful poem. I really loved the line "let's swim in the stars", it really evokes a sense of celestial emotions. Very well written. Keep up the great work.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2025
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Such a beautiful poem. I really loved the line "let's swim in the stars", it really evokes a sense of celestial emotions. Very well written. Keep up the great work.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2025
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Imaginos, as always you are so very kind. I appreciate your lovely review more than you know. Thanks again, my wonderful friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Iza Deleanu
This picture is such a nice background for your romantic poem, but just so you know I try to swim at night and is not very safe as all the giants are migrating and lots of poisonous stuff:) Thank you so much fir sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2025
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This picture is such a nice background for your romantic poem, but just so you know I try to swim at night and is not very safe as all the giants are migrating and lots of poisonous stuff:) Thank you so much fir sharing.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2025
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Dearest Iza,, as always you are so very kind. I appreciate your lovely review more than you know. Thanks again, my wonderful friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Jill McCauslin
I love the poem with this photo. They go together so well. I like the twisting around of looking up at the water and swimming in the stars. It was a little surprise that worked well. It's fun, isn't it, to use these Japanese poetry forms.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2025
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I love the poem with this photo. They go together so well. I like the twisting around of looking up at the water and swimming in the stars. It was a little surprise that worked well. It's fun, isn't it, to use these Japanese poetry forms.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2025
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Hi Jill, I don't know if we have met before, but it is so nice to meet you.
I am glad you like that last line. It seemed to match the criteria of ending it a little comical. And I appreciate your kind words for my romantic beach story. It was a fun write for Gypsy's club. I thank you again, my dear friend.
Love, Debi