My dear friend
Mama Pat5 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine tribute here Lisa and I enjoyed your fine words here. Usually a nonet starts with nine syllables and ends in one, you might want to add another line at the top? But it is up to you. I adored the sentiment in your words here Lisa, love Dolly x x x
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A fine tribute here Lisa and I enjoyed your fine words here. Usually a nonet starts with nine syllables and ends in one, you might want to add another line at the top? But it is up to you. I adored the sentiment in your words here Lisa, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 29-Jan-2025
Comment from patcelaw
Thank you for the poem and thank you so much for reviewing my other work that I put up. It's been a long time since I've seen anything from you and I was wondering if you were still around. I love you. Mama Pat.
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Thank you for the poem and thank you so much for reviewing my other work that I put up. It's been a long time since I've seen anything from you and I was wondering if you were still around. I love you. Mama Pat.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2025
Comment from jim vecchio
As I just wrote to another, God will never leave you or forsake you. Perhaps you could revise the font, embolden or color it, and not use such a dark background. My eyes, and that of others on this site, are beginning to go.
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As I just wrote to another, God will never leave you or forsake you. Perhaps you could revise the font, embolden or color it, and not use such a dark background. My eyes, and that of others on this site, are beginning to go.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2025
Comment from royowen
Hi Lisa, I think you're trying to write a nonet poem which is one of Pat's favourite forms however you are one line short, the first one which is nine syllables, but that's ok, well done, blessings Roy
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Hi Lisa, I think you're trying to write a nonet poem which is one of Pat's favourite forms however you are one line short, the first one which is nine syllables, but that's ok, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Jan-2025
Comment from barbara.wilkey
It always a good thing we have somebody who prayers for us. It's important that we continue to pray for each other. That's a great thing about FanStory we are a strong praying community. Thank you for sharing.
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It always a good thing we have somebody who prayers for us. It's important that we continue to pray for each other. That's a great thing about FanStory we are a strong praying community. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2025
