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lightning bugs

Beautiful display

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Sorry I am of no help at all with technical stuff. I find toasters challenging. Thank you for sharing this beautiful and well written poem with us. I enjoyed reading.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2025

Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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Willie,

This is a very beautiful poem. It is sad to know the lighting bugs are going away.

I remember when I was a young child, I would capture them in a jar and watch them glow.

Great job my friend.

Cecilia

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2025

Comment from dovemarie
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Hi Willie, beautiful display! I'm glad you shared a memory of your childhood how you watched the lightning bugs. I liked your italicized wording too. It reminds me of the twists and turns of the bugs. Is the lightning bug becoming extinct? That will be too bad, they are pretty and give a good display at the river. Dove

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 16-Jan-2025
    According to scientists, there are fewer and fewer each year. Too sad.
    Willie
Comment from Tim Margetts
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I love this poem, around where I live (UK) there are no fire flies. One day I would love to see some.
Thank you, Willie, for sharing this poem and bringing them to life in my minds eye.
Tim
PS. Open the picture in Paint or any other similar picture editing and rotate it.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2025

Comment from patcelaw
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Your poem takes me back to the days of my childhood. In the nice warm summer evenings as a child we would go out into the yard and we would catch lightning bugs and put them in a jar. They were so much fun for us as children. I enjoyed your poem very much. I don't know how to straighten out the picture for you. Patricia.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2025