The Forest of Wonder
In The Attic - 313 total reviews
Comment from Carol Clark2
Another interesting chapter in your book. I like that the Guardian sent the children back to the attic to rest and reconsider their decision to go on an adventure. I hope they don't get hurt in the process of the adventure. Just curious: Why did you make the Guardian plural (they)?
Blessings. Carol
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Another interesting chapter in your book. I like that the Guardian sent the children back to the attic to rest and reconsider their decision to go on an adventure. I hope they don't get hurt in the process of the adventure. Just curious: Why did you make the Guardian plural (they)?
Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 13-Jan-2025
Comment from royowen
I love the mirror key, it's such a blessing to think they can return at will to where there adventures started, the guardian is well named, I think all of us are guardians in some form or other, I love this adventure, it is so diffent from your normal ones. Well done, blessings Roy
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I love the mirror key, it's such a blessing to think they can return at will to where there adventures started, the guardian is well named, I think all of us are guardians in some form or other, I love this adventure, it is so diffent from your normal ones. Well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 13-Jan-2025
Comment from Jacob1395
The forest certainly does sound like a magical place, and you do a brilliant job of bringing it to life in the reader's mind in this chapter. Another exciting, well written piece, Carol, I really enjoyed reading it.
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The forest certainly does sound like a magical place, and you do a brilliant job of bringing it to life in the reader's mind in this chapter. Another exciting, well written piece, Carol, I really enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2025
Comment from Ric Myworld
You had me scratching my head, figuring I must have missed something. But that's not odd, because most of the time I'm just stumbling along behind all the little animals anyway. Thanks for sharing.
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You had me scratching my head, figuring I must have missed something. But that's not odd, because most of the time I'm just stumbling along behind all the little animals anyway. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2025
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Now this makes sense and their adventure fits together. This would make a great mid-grade reader with some illustrations. Best of luck with this if you try selling it. I think it should go over very well. One word needs changed: Guardian's form . . . , and (then) extended. . .
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Now this makes sense and their adventure fits together. This would make a great mid-grade reader with some illustrations. Best of luck with this if you try selling it. I think it should go over very well. One word needs changed: Guardian's form . . . , and (then) extended. . .
Comment Written 11-Jan-2025
Comment from Wendy G
Thanks for your notes,as I too started witht he other one, and retraced my steps. It's a lovely story, Carol, and I am glad you made the girl more adventurous than her twin broher. Looking forward to the next.
Wendy
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Thanks for your notes,as I too started witht he other one, and retraced my steps. It's a lovely story, Carol, and I am glad you made the girl more adventurous than her twin broher. Looking forward to the next.
Wendy
Comment Written 10-Jan-2025
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
What a great addition to your story. Even if it is in reverse, had you not said anything I probably wouldn't have noticed. My brain is on vacation too.
Love you lots my friend.
Cecilia
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Carol,
What a great addition to your story. Even if it is in reverse, had you not said anything I probably wouldn't have noticed. My brain is on vacation too.
Love you lots my friend.
Cecilia
Comment Written 10-Jan-2025
Comment from Tim Margetts
Well, Carol.
I am anticipating many adventures for the twins to come.
This mirror can be a start of multitudes of clever adventures in this magical kingdom
Tim x
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Well, Carol.
I am anticipating many adventures for the twins to come.
This mirror can be a start of multitudes of clever adventures in this magical kingdom
Tim x
Comment Written 10-Jan-2025
Comment from patcelaw
I'm very much enjoyed the story even if it's out of order you still did a very good job with it and it can be entertained the whole time. I was listening to it. This would make a wonderful storybook for children in their ages from say 8 to 12 or 13. Patricia.
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I'm very much enjoyed the story even if it's out of order you still did a very good job with it and it can be entertained the whole time. I was listening to it. This would make a wonderful storybook for children in their ages from say 8 to 12 or 13. Patricia.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2025
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Now it makes a little more sense. Thank you.
The Guardian's voice was calm and reassuring. "Mistakes are how we learn, (reassuring,)
Mrs. Baker sent me home with the most beautiful be (gremblins here)
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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Now it makes a little more sense. Thank you.
The Guardian's voice was calm and reassuring. "Mistakes are how we learn, (reassuring,)
Mrs. Baker sent me home with the most beautiful be (gremblins here)
Comment Written 10-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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i was just fixing Mrs. Baker and I'll catch the other one now. I can't believe I didn't post it...wrote it last night and then left it sitting there. I'm losing my mind.
Smiles, Carol
