The Kirby Case - Part 6
Detective Mike Brady continues to look for a serial killer27 total reviews
Comment from Shanbreen
"need facial software for success.
They run each face to find a match.
In minutes, those results come back."
The wonderful things technology can do.
Pam, you have perked my interest. Waiting for what happens next. Well done.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2025
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"need facial software for success.
They run each face to find a match.
In minutes, those results come back."
The wonderful things technology can do.
Pam, you have perked my interest. Waiting for what happens next. Well done.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2025
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hi my friend. Thank you for following this story and for a great review.
Comment from Michele Harber
I'm having enough trouble getting my regular poems to rhyme well and read smoothly, and you're doing it while telling an entire story of a serial killer. I'm in absolute awe.
The story is getting more and more interesting, as new clues are revealed. Not that I'm getting wrapped up in this or anything, but I found myself saying, "Thank goodness they'll at least be able to alert the families." I'm actually following this as though I were watching an evolving news story. Great job!
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2025
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I'm having enough trouble getting my regular poems to rhyme well and read smoothly, and you're doing it while telling an entire story of a serial killer. I'm in absolute awe.
The story is getting more and more interesting, as new clues are revealed. Not that I'm getting wrapped up in this or anything, but I found myself saying, "Thank goodness they'll at least be able to alert the families." I'm actually following this as though I were watching an evolving news story. Great job!
Comment Written 13-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2025
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Michele. Thank you for your glowing feedback. But I don't think I'll write anything like this again and it's partly because it is hard to keep track of previous facts and to not go against them later in the poem.
The other reason though is that I had heavily promoted these and I was getting very few views. And I even complained to Tom about that and he did not respond because I think he knew as I finally did that it was because people saw the title Kirby case And didn't even open it because they didn't want to read anymore of it it got a huge percentage of reviews based on the number of views that it had. But I just don't think it's worth it in the future to do another project like this.
As always, I appreciate your feedback
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I give you credit for having done this in the first place, even if you never do another ongoing story like this again. I don't think I'd have the time or patience to even attempt something like this.
I suspect that length might be what scares some people off from reading this. To be honest, in the interest of time, I often avoid some of the longer works. However, having known you and your work for so long, I know that the quality will be worth my time.
My own works tend to get very few reviews in comparison to the number of views. I suspect that's because many of my entries are long as well. (I'll have to come up with another excuse for all my shorter works that get very few reviews.)
Comment from LJbutterfly
You've included so many clues and investigative techniques that this seems like a real murder mystery, full of suspense, excitement, and increased tension. Let's see what the next chapter brings.
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You've included so many clues and investigative techniques that this seems like a real murder mystery, full of suspense, excitement, and increased tension. Let's see what the next chapter brings.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2025
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I thought I had read this one, but I didn't want to miss this long tale of murder invented by you. Facial software and photo fit pictures as people recall the face of the murderer is always useful in solving these cases, love Dolly x x x
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I thought I had read this one, but I didn't want to miss this long tale of murder invented by you. Facial software and photo fit pictures as people recall the face of the murderer is always useful in solving these cases, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 12-Jan-2025
Comment from Dr. Nad
Well Pam I certainly enjoy the way you write and you are able to take a story and tell it in a rhyming fashion that allows us to be oblivious to the rhyme due to the quality of your writing. These families have been jacked around enough and have endured what no Family should have to go through. Thanks for continuing to keep this before us. Excellent job
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Well Pam I certainly enjoy the way you write and you are able to take a story and tell it in a rhyming fashion that allows us to be oblivious to the rhyme due to the quality of your writing. These families have been jacked around enough and have endured what no Family should have to go through. Thanks for continuing to keep this before us. Excellent job
Comment Written 11-Jan-2025
Comment from Dr. Nad
Well Pam I certainly enjoy the way you write and you are able to take a story and tell it in a rhyming fashion that allows us to be oblivious to the rhyme due to the quality of your writing. These families have been jacked around enough and have endured what no Family should have to go through. Thanks for continuing to keep this before us. Excellent job
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Well Pam I certainly enjoy the way you write and you are able to take a story and tell it in a rhyming fashion that allows us to be oblivious to the rhyme due to the quality of your writing. These families have been jacked around enough and have endured what no Family should have to go through. Thanks for continuing to keep this before us. Excellent job
Comment Written 11-Jan-2025
Comment from Sugarray77
I am enjoying the new additions as you build this story with tension, new clues, and a feeling of rushing to find the killer. Good plot, descriptions and a logical flow to the story/poem. Great job, Pam
Melissa
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I am enjoying the new additions as you build this story with tension, new clues, and a feeling of rushing to find the killer. Good plot, descriptions and a logical flow to the story/poem. Great job, Pam
Melissa
Comment Written 11-Jan-2025
Comment from jake cosmos aller
another great entry. DId you get my substack note? it is idiot proof so you should put these together into one epic posting and post it both audio and text let me know if you do so and I will post it on my blog you got this
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another great entry. DId you get my substack note? it is idiot proof so you should put these together into one epic posting and post it both audio and text let me know if you do so and I will post it on my blog you got this
Comment Written 10-Jan-2025
Comment from kahpot
It is so good they have found out their true identities, so that their families could be notified, and that they finally know, and hopefully talking to their friends may get them closer to catching this goon, very well written****kahpot
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It is so good they have found out their true identities, so that their families could be notified, and that they finally know, and hopefully talking to their friends may get them closer to catching this goon, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 10-Jan-2025
Comment from DonandVicki
As I follow along on this poetic mystery case, I am so impressed at how you can rhyme and make the poem flow so very well. I will follow along an see the outcome.
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As I follow along on this poetic mystery case, I am so impressed at how you can rhyme and make the poem flow so very well. I will follow along an see the outcome.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2025
