The Kirby Case - Part 5
Detective Mike Brady attempts to stop a serial killer29 total reviews
Comment from Shanbreen
This is getting to be quite interesting, Pam. Were you a detective in your previous life.=) I like the way you have paced out your story---quick and to the point. As usual well done.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2025
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This is getting to be quite interesting, Pam. Were you a detective in your previous life.=) I like the way you have paced out your story---quick and to the point. As usual well done.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2025
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ha.ha. No I was never a detective. But I watched a lot of detector shows and read books.
Thank you for reviewing this
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There you go. Smart people don't need to be trained or get an education. =)
Comment from Dr. Nad
Thank you so much Pam for taking the time to bring this case to light for us. Your cadence is excellent and this chapter was just a little bit different in its presentation but that breaks it up and bodes well for continuity and engagement. Our hearts and prayers continue to go out to the families and law-enforcement. Thanks for writing God bless.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much Pam for taking the time to bring this case to light for us. Your cadence is excellent and this chapter was just a little bit different in its presentation but that breaks it up and bodes well for continuity and engagement. Our hearts and prayers continue to go out to the families and law-enforcement. Thanks for writing God bless.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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God bless you too. Thank you for taking the time to read and review my epic poem.
Comment from Dr. Nad
Thank you so much Pam for taking the time to bring this case to light for us. Your cadence is excellent and this chapter was just a little bit different in its presentation but that breaks it up and bodes well for continuity and engagement. Our hearts and prayers continue to go out to the families and law-enforcement. Thanks for writing God bless.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much Pam for taking the time to bring this case to light for us. Your cadence is excellent and this chapter was just a little bit different in its presentation but that breaks it up and bodes well for continuity and engagement. Our hearts and prayers continue to go out to the families and law-enforcement. Thanks for writing God bless.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2025
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Another review by you that I’m sure I responded to for some reason I got a review twice in my inbox
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
There are many serial killars who are very charming and make women feel special. They are monsters walking among us.
Well done!
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Â Atticus
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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There are many serial killars who are very charming and make women feel special. They are monsters walking among us.
Well done!
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Â Atticus
Comment Written 11-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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Hi gypsy I like your quote at the end by Atticus. Thanks for the great review.
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello Pam and good morning. You are keeping the brisk pace and relevant clues flowing logically in your sing song verse. I am enjoying keeping up with Detective Brady and am rooting for him to find this killer. Good job.
Melissa
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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Hello Pam and good morning. You are keeping the brisk pace and relevant clues flowing logically in your sing song verse. I am enjoying keeping up with Detective Brady and am rooting for him to find this killer. Good job.
Melissa
Comment Written 11-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Melissa for following this series and providing your feedback
Comment from LJbutterfly
Tall Mr. Right, with baby blue eyes and a gun, is on a roll. While Mike Brady is still conducting his investigation, Old Blue Eyes has murdered another victim. He has to be stopped. I can't wait. Great chapter.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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Tall Mr. Right, with baby blue eyes and a gun, is on a roll. While Mike Brady is still conducting his investigation, Old Blue Eyes has murdered another victim. He has to be stopped. I can't wait. Great chapter.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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Thank you, LJ for your encouraging and thoughtful review
Comment from Begin Again
This man, regardless of his intelligence to accomplish these murders, is a monster! I get chills with every line I read envisioning these poor girls. And you putting it into a poem blows me away. Well done!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2025
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This man, regardless of his intelligence to accomplish these murders, is a monster! I get chills with every line I read envisioning these poor girls. And you putting it into a poem blows me away. Well done!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 10-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Carol for this encouraging review and for following this series
Comment from Teri7
This makes my heart so sad to hear of murderers and these poor women. They never saw it coming it seems. You used great rhyming words again. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2025
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This makes my heart so sad to hear of murderers and these poor women. They never saw it coming it seems. You used great rhyming words again. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 10-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2025
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Blessings and thank you for the great review
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
So the fake IDs would slow down any investigation or alert to families which could help the police. This man was very smart but not smart enough to realise that his MO or method of operation was going to catch him out sooner or later. Once again, Pam, another excellent update in rhyming verse. Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2025
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So the fake IDs would slow down any investigation or alert to families which could help the police. This man was very smart but not smart enough to realise that his MO or method of operation was going to catch him out sooner or later. Once again, Pam, another excellent update in rhyming verse. Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 10-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Debbie for following along with your usual encouraging review
Comment from Ulla
I'm still intrigued by this crime story , Pam written in a poetic form. It's just amazing how you do that. I've had a bit of diversion going on, as you probably know. But here I am writing a review. Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2025
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I'm still intrigued by this crime story , Pam written in a poetic form. It's just amazing how you do that. I've had a bit of diversion going on, as you probably know. But here I am writing a review. Ulla xcx
Comment Written 10-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2025
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No, I did not know about your diversion. I’ve had quite the time having been in the hospital for three months out of the last five. That’s why I couldn’t review for the longest time because of various physical and abilities when I’m lying in a hospital bed to do so
In spite of your diversion thank you for the wonderful review