Brown Bear
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Comment from Dr. Nad
I love this poem it is presented with a wonderful picture that goes along with the high-quality story. I love the flow that you present us with and the clean rhymes that enhance the strength of this piece. I personally love a descriptive narrative that is nestled in a rhyming poem. You nailed it. Thanks.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025
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I love this poem it is presented with a wonderful picture that goes along with the high-quality story. I love the flow that you present us with and the clean rhymes that enhance the strength of this piece. I personally love a descriptive narrative that is nestled in a rhyming poem. You nailed it. Thanks.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025
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Dr. Nad,
Thank you for the wonderful review. I really appreciate the compliments. It helps when I am questioning my ability as a writer.
I appreciate you
Cecilia
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You are most definitely welcome my friend! God bless.
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God bless you.
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Cecilia,
a well constructed, composed and delivered acbd formatted rhyming poem.
Along with the actual image you chose, your words painted the rest within a very realistic association... and who doesn't dream of a maple tree full of sap... hmmmmm, I do! Actually, the whole poem sounds like I could have been your subject:>))
Well done, and nice to have read and reviewed you for the very first time.
Looking forward to reading more of your posts.
With our thoughts we create...
the scenario of life.
Kind regards,
James.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025
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Hi Cecilia,
a well constructed, composed and delivered acbd formatted rhyming poem.
Along with the actual image you chose, your words painted the rest within a very realistic association... and who doesn't dream of a maple tree full of sap... hmmmmm, I do! Actually, the whole poem sounds like I could have been your subject:>))
Well done, and nice to have read and reviewed you for the very first time.
Looking forward to reading more of your posts.
With our thoughts we create...
the scenario of life.
Kind regards,
James.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025
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James,
Thank you for the wonderful review. I really appreciate you and your compliments.
Cecilia
Comment from Rene Tyo
I love poems that are told through the perspective of wildlife. This is exactly as I would envision a hibernating bear would awaken. Grumpy and in a bad mood, well said! You capture nature very well in your poetry, thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025
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I love poems that are told through the perspective of wildlife. This is exactly as I would envision a hibernating bear would awaken. Grumpy and in a bad mood, well said! You capture nature very well in your poetry, thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 11-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025
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Rene,
Thank you for the review. I appreciate it.
Cecilia
Comment from F. William Lester
Good 'ole bear. Two things in mind: eat and sleep. Your poem put a smile on my face and brightened my day. I thought your description of the curmudgeonly bear was an appropriate metaphor for many of us in our daily lives. Thanks for sharing it. Be well.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025
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Good 'ole bear. Two things in mind: eat and sleep. Your poem put a smile on my face and brightened my day. I thought your description of the curmudgeonly bear was an appropriate metaphor for many of us in our daily lives. Thanks for sharing it. Be well.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the wonderful review. I had fun writing this poem. It only took three days to write it.
I am glad I could put a smile on your face.
Cecilia
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You're welcome, Cecilia.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation, Cecilia.
-You wrote a good poem with
effective imagery and rhyme.
-You paint a good word picture of the bear.
-A good first verse about his "grumpy mood."
-The stream is enticing so that is a help.
-Then he finds the perfect place for his nap.
-Very well done.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025
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-Nice image and presentation, Cecilia.
-You wrote a good poem with
effective imagery and rhyme.
-You paint a good word picture of the bear.
-A good first verse about his "grumpy mood."
-The stream is enticing so that is a help.
-Then he finds the perfect place for his nap.
-Very well done.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025
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Pam,
Thank you for the great review. I had fun writing this one. It only took three days to get it right.
Cecilia
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You are very welcome, Cecilia. The three days were worth it!
Comment from zanya
It's always so interesting to read about nature in its many manifestations and here is a portrayal of the brown bear and its 'foodie' habits and a great pic to illustrate
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025
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It's always so interesting to read about nature in its many manifestations and here is a portrayal of the brown bear and its 'foodie' habits and a great pic to illustrate
Comment Written 11-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025
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Zanya,
Thank you for the wonderful review. I appreciate you.
Cecilia
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I think we are all a little grumpy when we are hungry, much like this brown bear, LOL. Glad this one found some salmon to fill him up before his afternoon nap. I enjoyed reading your rhyming poem about this brown bear, Cecilia.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025
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I think we are all a little grumpy when we are hungry, much like this brown bear, LOL. Glad this one found some salmon to fill him up before his afternoon nap. I enjoyed reading your rhyming poem about this brown bear, Cecilia.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 11-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025
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Valda,
Thank you for the great review. This poem was fun to write. It only took me three days :(
Cecilia
Comment from June Sargent
He's got the life! Belly full of sap and now he's ready for a nap. I could use some of that salmon. And then I'll go look for a hammock beneath a maple tree. Life of a brown bear sounds fine to me.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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He's got the life! Belly full of sap and now he's ready for a nap. I could use some of that salmon. And then I'll go look for a hammock beneath a maple tree. Life of a brown bear sounds fine to me.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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June,
Thank you for the wonderful review. Yes, the bear is living his best life.
Cecilia
Comment from Thesis
You've described a day in the life of a Brown Bear quite well. Survival is key and has repeated this process for hundreds of years. These hunters are historically adept and always survive. It's a great tribute to this species.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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You've described a day in the life of a Brown Bear quite well. Survival is key and has repeated this process for hundreds of years. These hunters are historically adept and always survive. It's a great tribute to this species.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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Thesis,
Thank you for the wonderful review. I appreciate you.
Cecilia
Comment from godlucifer
i find it amazing how they can sleep for months. a bear is one of nature most amazing creatures. your poem was written with a gift. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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i find it amazing how they can sleep for months. a bear is one of nature most amazing creatures. your poem was written with a gift. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
Comment Written 10-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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Godlucifer,
Thank you for your great review. I appreciate you.