Unconditionally
Five-Seven Five33 total reviews
Comment from Dawn Munro
What a beautiful 5-7-5 poem -- the message is the most precious one any poem can offer! Indeed, Christ's gift was the ultimate, and it's hard to understand why anyone would turn it down...
Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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What a beautiful 5-7-5 poem -- the message is the most precious one any poem can offer! Indeed, Christ's gift was the ultimate, and it's hard to understand why anyone would turn it down...
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 24-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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Thyank you sovery much, Dawn. I hope you are feeling well today. Don
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I am feeling better, Don -- thank you! You're very welcome!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Very true: unconditional love - no matter who gives it - is bestowing the ultimate gift. Its rarity makes it extra special and meaningful. Best of luck with this in the 5-7-5 contest. I hope it brings you success in the polls. xo
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025
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Very true: unconditional love - no matter who gives it - is bestowing the ultimate gift. Its rarity makes it extra special and meaningful. Best of luck with this in the 5-7-5 contest. I hope it brings you success in the polls. xo
Comment Written 12-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025
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Thank you so very much, Rachelle.
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My pleasure!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A beautiful proclamation of faith for the contest here, sir -- wonderfully composed with warm and reassuring word choice... Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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A beautiful proclamation of faith for the contest here, sir -- wonderfully composed with warm and reassuring word choice... Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 10-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Yvette, your reviews are always worth waiting for.
Comment from godlucifer
he sacrifice for us all. he gave us his ultimate gift which is love. in grief,in pain we shall share our love with jesus. your poem was thought out and written with a gift. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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he sacrifice for us all. he gave us his ultimate gift which is love. in grief,in pain we shall share our love with jesus. your poem was thought out and written with a gift. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
Comment Written 10-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much your review is very kind.
Comment from Nicki.B
This is beautifully put together such little words but such a strong true message. It is a perfect entry for the 5-7-5 poetry prompt. Good luck with the contest.
Best Wishes
Nicki
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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This is beautifully put together such little words but such a strong true message. It is a perfect entry for the 5-7-5 poetry prompt. Good luck with the contest.
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 10-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much, Nicki.
Comment from Elias Noor
This haiku beautifully captures the essence of selfless, divine love in a concise and heartfelt way. The theme of sacrifice and grace is clear and emotionally resonant.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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This haiku beautifully captures the essence of selfless, divine love in a concise and heartfelt way. The theme of sacrifice and grace is clear and emotionally resonant.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Elias, I appreciate your review.
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Amen, Amen, Amen. I rejoice with you!!!! I would like to add how much I love those words and tell you how powerful it is in such few words. Awesome 5-7-5.
Great job, Don! I wish this was voting, but since it isn't, I wish you good luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing with us. Love, Debi
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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Amen, Amen, Amen. I rejoice with you!!!! I would like to add how much I love those words and tell you how powerful it is in such few words. Awesome 5-7-5.
Great job, Don! I wish this was voting, but since it isn't, I wish you good luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing with us. Love, Debi
Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Debi, so much your review is very kind.
Comment from Boogienights
This is beautiful and so very true. The only way to return the gift, is to live by his word and show kindness to others. I wish you the very best in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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This is beautiful and so very true. The only way to return the gift, is to live by his word and show kindness to others. I wish you the very best in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Thank you so very much Boogie.
Comment from teafor2
DONANDVICKI, this is an excellent pious corroboration of biblical account
of man's current salvation. Although sparse in its seventeen syllables, it is
the most powerful event in humanity's history. Good luck in the contest.
teafor2
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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DONANDVICKI, this is an excellent pious corroboration of biblical account
of man's current salvation. Although sparse in its seventeen syllables, it is
the most powerful event in humanity's history. Good luck in the contest.
teafor2
Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much your review is very kind.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Unconditional love is the best kind and we rarely feel it these days except from our pets. You know how you feel about your faith and this post is touching and warm hearted, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Unconditional love is the best kind and we rarely feel it these days except from our pets. You know how you feel about your faith and this post is touching and warm hearted, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Dolly, for this generous review.