2024 Gypsy's Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 275 "~*~ Tangerine Sunset ~*~"x
9 total reviews
Comment from artisart4u
This a nice poem about how the colors at sunset shines everywhere.
It is nice how you used the colors in your poem.
Congratulations on winning the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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This a nice poem about how the colors at sunset shines everywhere.
It is nice how you used the colors in your poem.
Congratulations on winning the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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Thank you 😊 🌼 🌸 🌻 🌹
Gypsy hugs
Comment from dragonpoet
Hey MariVal.
This poem has a nice bit of metaphor and good personification of the wheat. I can see the wheat's movement as a wave goodbye to the day.
I like the font color matching the beautiful artwork.
Congrats on winning the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a nice day.
Joan
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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Hey MariVal.
This poem has a nice bit of metaphor and good personification of the wheat. I can see the wheat's movement as a wave goodbye to the day.
I like the font color matching the beautiful artwork.
Congrats on winning the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a nice day.
Joan
Comment Written 30-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Joan, I appreciate your congratulations. Thank you 😊 🌼 🌸 🌻 🌹
Gypsy hugs
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You’re welcome on all counts, MatiVal.
Joan
Comment from Contests
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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Comment Written 30-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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Thank you 😊 🌼 🌸 🌻 🌹
Gypsy hugs
Comment from kahpot
Beautifully written and presented, I really like the image I get when reading
Tangerine Sunset" as the wheat say goodbye to a most important life source, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Beautifully written and presented, I really like the image I get when reading
Tangerine Sunset" as the wheat say goodbye to a most important life source, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
This is really beautiful. But I thought that I already said so yesterday, it's beautiful all the same. Thanks for sharing. Have a great day. Today we are in Texas by our two sons, daughter and our son's wife.
RJ
RJ
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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This is really beautiful. But I thought that I already said so yesterday, it's beautiful all the same. Thanks for sharing. Have a great day. Today we are in Texas by our two sons, daughter and our son's wife.
RJ
RJ
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Hi Gypsy, I was sure I'd reviewed this one because I remember enthusing about the colour, tangerine, and the personified wheat fields. Beautifully done! Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Hi Gypsy, I was sure I'd reviewed this one because I remember enthusing about the colour, tangerine, and the personified wheat fields. Beautifully done! Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Yes, the first time I made a mistake and it didn't go through the contest link.
Thank you very much for your exceptional review. Have a wonderful weekend ☺️
Gypsy 😊
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this again. I thought I reviewed this contest entry yesterday. Maybe my brain is playing tricks on me. It's possible. LOL. This is a very strong contest entry. The poem is perfect as is the presentation. Good luck.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Thank you for sharing this again. I thought I reviewed this contest entry yesterday. Maybe my brain is playing tricks on me. It's possible. LOL. This is a very strong contest entry. The poem is perfect as is the presentation. Good luck.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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The first time didn't go through the contest link so I had to re do it.
Thank you very much for your exceptional review.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Ulla
Hi Marival. It's a beautiful lune poem I absolutely love it. Your presentation is beautiful as well. Just one thing: normally a lune poem is written like this:
Tangerine Sunset
Over farms
Wheat fields wave goodbye.
The words are forming a half moon. Hence it's a lune poem. Good luck, Besitos, Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Hi Marival. It's a beautiful lune poem I absolutely love it. Your presentation is beautiful as well. Just one thing: normally a lune poem is written like this:
Tangerine Sunset
Over farms
Wheat fields wave goodbye.
The words are forming a half moon. Hence it's a lune poem. Good luck, Besitos, Ulla xxx
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Gracias, guapa,
I fixed it. Thank you very much 😊 have a wonderful weekend.
Marival
Comment from shelley kaye
now it's in the contest!!
a great tangerine lune
with nice imagery of wheat fields
waving goodbye in an autumn breeze
smooth flow throughout. . .
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
shelley :-)
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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now it's in the contest!!
a great tangerine lune
with nice imagery of wheat fields
waving goodbye in an autumn breeze
smooth flow throughout. . .
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
shelley :-)
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Yes, I had to re do it though the contest link.
Thank you very much for your exceptional review.
Gypsy 😊