Comment from Angel Debbie

Exceptional

Oh that is a beautiful piece you wrote there. Did you ever have it put on record or cd? If not you should have. I bet the church loved it if you did it for them. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024

Thanks Debbie, for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

God lives outside of space and time, I enjoyed this line of yours, "God will never slumber neither does He sleep." God is all powerful and fills us with his loving grace.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024

Thanks D&V for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Thanks for sharing this song, Roy. And what a comfort it is to know that our Lord never slumbers and is always watching over us. I'm glad you had the recording to write your well crafted poem which had the perfect meter for a song!

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024

Thanks Helen for these brilliant comments and review, blessings Roy

Comment from Nicki.B

Excellent

Roy you seem to be a man of man talents not just a poet but also musical. This is wonderful. I was going to say how did you forget you even wrote it then I paused to think well with the number of poems you have written would you even remember them all there are so many lol! Such a creative mind, beautiful imagery and lovely spiritual tune! Well done.
Best Wishes
Nicki

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024

Thanks Nicki, for these wonderful comments and review, blessings Roy

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Wow! I can certainly imagine your words put to music, as maybe be a religious prayer, the best I can do (I can't sing) is hum these words and it sounds great, so very well written****kahpot

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024

Thanks Kahpot for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy

Comment from Sergeant F. Dare

Exceptional

I really like this song, Royowen. I'm glad that you found it so you could share your work and, through the power of the pen, inspire others. I also relate to writing in seclusion, until I found I could share my works here. I wish that you had another.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024

Thanks Sarge, for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy

Comment from jmdg1954

Exceptional

Roy,
I'm happy to have six star left in my music book to reward for this finely written song.

As I read it, I also had a hit of melody in my head. Truly made it enjoyable.

One favor... change the year at your signature to 2024. We ain't that old yet, haha....

Cheers mate.
John

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024

Thanks John, for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy

reply by jmdg1954 on 01-Dec-2024

Your welcome

reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024

Thank you

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Yes, in due course all the difficult pathways will be made smooth. Meantime we have His presence to guide us through all times, good and bad. Looking forward to seeing Him.
Wendy

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024

Thanks Wendy, for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

This was beautiful. It was easy to read and the chorus was quickly something that felt familiar. You are a talented poet and lyricist. Thank you for sharing. Gretchen

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024

Thanks Gretchen, for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I could hear the song in my head as I read. Thank you for sharing your wonderful God given talent with us. We are blessed with each post we read. This is another wonderful poem/song.

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024

Thanks Barbara for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy