A Questionable Verdict
A 5-7-5-7-7 poem2 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A poignant write here Mark, an unusual subject for you, but yes this prisoner has mixed feelings about his sentence, maybe he is regretful, but moving forward is the only way to succeed and he needs to do the time for his crime, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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A poignant write here Mark, an unusual subject for you, but yes this prisoner has mixed feelings about his sentence, maybe he is regretful, but moving forward is the only way to succeed and he needs to do the time for his crime, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your review and kind words.
Comment from Bill Schott
This tanka-form, A Questionable Verdict, has the proper formatting and suggests that the guilt is likely misdirected or should be more widely shared.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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This tanka-form, A Questionable Verdict, has the proper formatting and suggests that the guilt is likely misdirected or should be more widely shared.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your review and kind words.
