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Wanting to be a different/ Newer person
2 total reviews
Comment from
Michael Ludwinder
Congrats on your first post! It is incredibly moving! I love the creative way you wrote this like "Etch A Sketch my world" and "Elmer glue my heart back together." They perfectly share the emotions I think you are sharing here of longing for healing. The imagery of being cradled like a newborn is so emotional. Your voice shines through in your writing. Keep up the amazing work!
Comment Written 04-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
Thank You so much for your feedback. It's greatly appreciated.
Comment from
DonandVicki
This poem moves me and makes me feel that this is a cry for a new start in life. Your words bring out a lot of subtle pain. Written in the style of a sonnet. Well done.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
Thanks for your feedback, and yes I wrote it with the feelings of wanting and needing a new life.
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