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Reminiscing

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A collection of short stories

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Comment from Neonewman
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Ha!
See, God provides. It may have interrupted the lesson, but you have to admit, that was pretty darned cool. Thank you for sharing this memory. Great idea!
God bless,
Steve

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2024
    God works in mysterious way. Steven is 31 years old and still loves the Lord. That's a huge win. Thank you for the kind review.
reply by Neonewman on 10-Oct-2024
    I love that!
Comment from Kahlani
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What a delightful story. It really brings home the power of prayer. I'm new to FanStory, but will check out Lyenochka's post 'Spirit's Nudge.' Thanks for the tip.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
    Welcome!!! Lyenochka is one of our best authors and is a really nice person. Thank you for dropping by and sharing this kind review with us.
Comment from Dawn Munro
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(Lyenochka, one of my favorite author's on FanStory -- no apostrophe needed for authors)

Hahahaha! What a charming story, and I (for one) say, "Why not? Jesus loves it when we call on Him! "

Hugs to that child (no doubt a big man now... *smile.)

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
    Steven is 31 an continues to love the Lord. I have made the correction. Thank you for the kind review.
reply by Dawn Munro on 04-Oct-2024
    Still give him a hug from his "aunt" Deborah Dawn. :)
Comment from T B Botts
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Hello Barbara,
How often has God granted us prayers that were frivolous or perhaps not in line with what one would think of as worthy of God's time. Even the most mundane things in our lives are important to the Lord. I'm glad that Steven's prayer was answered in the affirmative. Thanks for sharing this gal.
Tom

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
    God wants use to share every part of our lives with Him. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
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Hard to argue against success. (as much as you might want to)
This story reminded me of a prayer my son, Steven lifted up while having lunch at Arby's. - Missing a comma after 'Steven'.
Best wishes.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
    Thank you for the catch and the kind review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Steven sounds so cute... it reminds me of my grandson, Atticus. Kids know what strings to pull effectively. LoL. Even with God.

Kids are wiser than adults sometimes.

Well done

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
    Steven was a master at pulling strings and at 31 still is. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Douglas Goff
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What a fantastically cute story. I would be 500 pounds if I knew as a child that praying for food worked.

Kids really do do and say the funniest things. (I said do do)

Douglas

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
    I understand the do do. LOL Yes, my boys were all characters. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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This was really amusing. What is it with kids that they insist on one thing and then demand the opposite? Who know prayers could be so effective? I hope he still has a grasp on faith like he had at that time.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
    Steven does still have a strong faith. I think part of it started here. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Isn't it great to look back and remember those magical moments that can still bring happiness all these years later. For you, and for us who get to relive them with you. Thanks for sharing.

As I placed our order at the Arby's counter, I repeated(ly) asked Steven, . . .

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
    Thank you for the catch. I honestly believe the 'ly' was there and gremlins came in and stole it. I appreciate the help and the kind review.
reply by Ric Myworld on 02-Oct-2024
    LOL. I know how you feel about the gremlins. They either mess things up, or I just read right through my own mistakes.
Comment from Brenda Strauser
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I enjoyed your story. Steven got his curly fries. The story was funny that he prayed for the curly fries. My boys were like that when they were little. Well written. Very nice job.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
    Thank you for understanding.