Table Talk
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Comment from papa55mike
It's so silly when people argue and fuss over things that don't mean anything. A table and a mirror. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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It's so silly when people argue and fuss over things that don't mean anything. A table and a mirror. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 02-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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Many thanks, Mike. I agree with you but human nature is a great base for our writing. God bless you too
Comment from Jacob1395
I loved the line when Bob says, "but if she is wrong, she will be wearing egg on her face for a long time and I don't mean an Easter egg." This really made me smile as I was reading and I could really picture Bob's face as well. The dialogue in your piece is excellent and I thought it was really entertaining. I thought this was an interesting spin on the writing prompt, I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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I loved the line when Bob says, "but if she is wrong, she will be wearing egg on her face for a long time and I don't mean an Easter egg." This really made me smile as I was reading and I could really picture Bob's face as well. The dialogue in your piece is excellent and I thought it was really entertaining. I thought this was an interesting spin on the writing prompt, I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Jacob. I am glad you enjoyed the tale and thank you, also, for the encouraging review.