Danger is my business
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "The Telephone Call"Most everything Mickey did was dangerous.
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Comment from Ulla
Hi Liz, I see that this is biographical but I'm not quite sure about your relationship to Mickey? Is he a brother or did you look after him. I'll have to read it again. All best, Ulla xcx
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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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Hi Liz, I see that this is biographical but I'm not quite sure about your relationship to Mickey? Is he a brother or did you look after him. I'll have to read it again. All best, Ulla xcx
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Comment Written 13-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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Yes he is my brother, one year younger. I was always his guardian trying to keep him out of trouble, because my mother did not have any esteem for men and my brother was a little man. I tried to get him to avoid any trouble with her.
Comment from knowledge
Great job. Check the paragraph after "green 1970 Chevy pickup" You have some quotation marks in the wrong place! I used the above as a marker as it is easy to find. So, is this a true story of you or someone else? Your Friend Knowledge
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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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Great job. Check the paragraph after "green 1970 Chevy pickup" You have some quotation marks in the wrong place! I used the above as a marker as it is easy to find. So, is this a true story of you or someone else? Your Friend Knowledge
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Comment Written 13-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your involved review. I just finished writing my autobiography now I'm writing about my brother he had a his head injury when he was 40 but he had a wonderful life before that and I wanted him to look at that. No problem