Glory's Clouds
Club entry: 15-10 alternating10 total reviews
Comment from ESOSTINE
I love reading your faith based work of poetry. You penned it well from a perspective of one who has sound Bible knowledge. Consider cross-checking the syllable count of the fourth line of the first verse. Well done, dear Erica.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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I love reading your faith based work of poetry. You penned it well from a perspective of one who has sound Bible knowledge. Consider cross-checking the syllable count of the fourth line of the first verse. Well done, dear Erica.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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You were right! I fixed it
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Beautiful.
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Beautiful.
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Thank you :)
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Interesting perspective on God descendant on earth and how we have not met his expectations. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Interesting perspective on God descendant on earth and how we have not met his expectations. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Thank you for reading :)
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
This looks like an interesting poem format. You did a nice job with it. I see you did the artwork as well. Beautiful. I wish I could do both. Thanks for sharing. Have a great weekend.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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This looks like an interesting poem format. You did a nice job with it. I see you did the artwork as well. Beautiful. I wish I could do both. Thanks for sharing. Have a great weekend.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2024
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Thank you do much :) you're actually the first person to notice that
Comment from Begin Again
Welcome to Fanstory, Erika. I see you haven't been here long and it's the first I've had to read your thoughts. It's a very spiritual and moving poem.the Lord has paid for our sins and protects us from Satan's doings. If we have faith, one day we will be graced by his face and loving arms.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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Welcome to Fanstory, Erika. I see you haven't been here long and it's the first I've had to read your thoughts. It's a very spiritual and moving poem.the Lord has paid for our sins and protects us from Satan's doings. If we have faith, one day we will be graced by his face and loving arms.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 13-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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Thank your for welcoming me and foe your kind word
Comment from Karen Cherry
I haven't seen you before. Have you seen the notice for the "Dear God" contest? Seems right up your alley. You write strongly. Enjoy your weekend. Karen
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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I haven't seen you before. Have you seen the notice for the "Dear God" contest? Seems right up your alley. You write strongly. Enjoy your weekend. Karen
Comment Written 13-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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Thank you. I'm fairly new, I
think I've been on the site for maybe two months? Most of my promotions have been stories. I did write something for the dear God contest but it was more like a letter than a poem. You as well :)
Comment from shelley kaye
this was a very thought-provoking and emotionally stirring poem
the imagery was nice and comforting and full of hope
the rhyme and meter flowed smoothly
all-around nice work!
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
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this was a very thought-provoking and emotionally stirring poem
the imagery was nice and comforting and full of hope
the rhyme and meter flowed smoothly
all-around nice work!
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 12-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
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Thank you, I appreciate it
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
What a beautifully written poem. I love the way you wrote it. You express a heartfelt longing for spiritual fulfillment so well. I love how you wrote about one day seeing God's face.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
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What a beautifully written poem. I love the way you wrote it. You express a heartfelt longing for spiritual fulfillment so well. I love how you wrote about one day seeing God's face.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
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Yah, to be honest I could care less if there's an afterlife but I really would like to see God once
Comment from jim vecchio
This was the best-yet entry for this event. Shelley should give you a gold star for this one! You told the story of personal redemption in this difficult poetic form just perfectly! Only one small concern: Second verse, first stanza: should be they?
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
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This was the best-yet entry for this event. Shelley should give you a gold star for this one! You told the story of personal redemption in this difficult poetic form just perfectly! Only one small concern: Second verse, first stanza: should be they?
Comment Written 12-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
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I'm glad you liked it. Thanks :)
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Always!
Comment from Pamusart
Hi, Erika
Good luck in the club contest
It sounds like you're searching for yourself spiritually. You're asking yourself to do things that nobody else can do. Nobody besides the Saints.
Very few people have flown beside Angels in the kind of clouds you're talking about. I take this with a grain of salt. I know you're religious. This means a lot to you. I'm a new Christian too
Here you know it should be stolen. I think I have a solution
'So take back once again what Satan stole'
What do you think?
" Take back once again what Satan has stole"
Here What do you mean by paying what you can't afford? Are you saying spiritually?
" Ascending on glory's clouds, paying what I can't afford"
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
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Hi, Erika
Good luck in the club contest
It sounds like you're searching for yourself spiritually. You're asking yourself to do things that nobody else can do. Nobody besides the Saints.
Very few people have flown beside Angels in the kind of clouds you're talking about. I take this with a grain of salt. I know you're religious. This means a lot to you. I'm a new Christian too
Here you know it should be stolen. I think I have a solution
'So take back once again what Satan stole'
What do you think?
" Take back once again what Satan has stole"
Here What do you mean by paying what you can't afford? Are you saying spiritually?
" Ascending on glory's clouds, paying what I can't afford"
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
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Thank you. Yes I meant spiritually. Since he died to pay for our sins
Comment from Earl Corp
This should have been a faith poetry contest entry.your poem rhymed, made sense, and was spiritual. Very nice job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
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This should have been a faith poetry contest entry.your poem rhymed, made sense, and was spiritual. Very nice job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
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Thank you :)
