Moonlight Reflecting
This was inspired by reading the word Moonlight.11 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
Sometimes there are no words to describe the feeling of awe when one encounters such amazing beauty and serenity. This is a lovely poem, and you have expressed your feelings very well.
Wendy
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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Sometimes there are no words to describe the feeling of awe when one encounters such amazing beauty and serenity. This is a lovely poem, and you have expressed your feelings very well.
Wendy
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your review. I appreciate it very much.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The moonlight dances on the water and provides us with a magical scene and you brought this to life here with your well chosen words Patricia, a joy to read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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The moonlight dances on the water and provides us with a magical scene and you brought this to life here with your well chosen words Patricia, a joy to read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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I am always grateful when I get such nice reviews. This is thank you so much.
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Patricia,
This is an excellent poem. There's always magic in reflecting waters, especially the moonlight.
Your photo complements your writing nicely.
Cindy
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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Patricia,
This is an excellent poem. There's always magic in reflecting waters, especially the moonlight.
Your photo complements your writing nicely.
Cindy
Comment Written 09-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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Thank you for stopping by reading my work and leaving such a nice
Comment from lyenochka
You're really becoming a pro with the Kimo poetic form, Patricia! Enjoyed your moonlight reflections. Your picture is indeed mesmerizing. Keep up the great work!
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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You're really becoming a pro with the Kimo poetic form, Patricia! Enjoyed your moonlight reflections. Your picture is indeed mesmerizing. Keep up the great work!
Comment Written 09-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read my work and leave me such a nice review.
Comment from Karen Cherry
Might it be better with :
It left me mesmerized.
Just a thought. Great picture.
I hope you are having a good week. I am pooped out. Happy, but tired to the bone. My body is saying rude things to me. Karen
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Might it be better with :
It left me mesmerized.
Just a thought. Great picture.
I hope you are having a good week. I am pooped out. Happy, but tired to the bone. My body is saying rude things to me. Karen
Comment Written 09-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your review and thank you for the suggestion. I had considered it left instead of leaving, but I chose to use leaving instead.
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Okie dokie. just a thought. :-)
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and lovely short poem about the affects of the moonlight. You used very good descriptive words and amazing imagery from the art work you chose. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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This is a very beautiful and lovely short poem about the affects of the moonlight. You used very good descriptive words and amazing imagery from the art work you chose. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 09-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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With gratitude in my heart, I wish to thank you for a very nice review.
Comment from Mintybee
This is a lovely poem. The structure of observation, commentary, feeling, worked well for me. I like that you ended on "mesmerized" which is a really strong word.
Mintybee
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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This is a lovely poem. The structure of observation, commentary, feeling, worked well for me. I like that you ended on "mesmerized" which is a really strong word.
Mintybee
Comment Written 09-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for your most excellent review. It is very much appreciated.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Sometime solitude is the best place to talk with God and allow Him to speak with us. At least for me. LOL Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem with us.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Sometime solitude is the best place to talk with God and allow Him to speak with us. At least for me. LOL Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem with us.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Thank you for a very nice review.
Comment from jim vecchio
A beautiful image adorned by your words. Nice to have a peaceful image to impart midst all the angst in some FS posts. I hope The Lord will grant you as much peace of Spirit as this offering implies.
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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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A beautiful image adorned by your words. Nice to have a peaceful image to impart midst all the angst in some FS posts. I hope The Lord will grant you as much peace of Spirit as this offering implies.
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Comment Written 09-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your very thoughtful and pleasant comments. I hope you will also experience that same kind of peace.
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Thank you so much!
Comment from RJ Heritage
A short and sweet verse that captures the wonderful moonlight. The picture is breathtaking with all of its different hues. Thanks for posting.
Have a blessed day.
RJ
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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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A short and sweet verse that captures the wonderful moonlight. The picture is breathtaking with all of its different hues. Thanks for posting.
Have a blessed day.
RJ
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Comment Written 09-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much for your very kind review. I appreciate it.
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You are very welcome
RJ
