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Poetry Defined

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Fine Poetry from the Heart

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Comment from royowen
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The trouble with remembering tragedy, and still living with it, makes a mockery of God's word Ricky, if God can choose to forget our sin, surely we can put the past behind us, if it controls us, it is an idol. My sister lost her 18 month old son who died in her arms, then put it behind her and got on with her life. I know it's tough. But with God's help it can be done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
    Thanksahain Roy andenjoy the fine weather.
    Doctor Ricky
reply by royowen on 05-Jul-2024
    Thank you
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Another The Prologue and First Chapter!! I would love to check out your files. LOl Thank you for sharing this with us. I enjoyed reading, but still would like to check out your files.


Death by Stll Birth. (Still?)

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
    Thanks Barbara.
    Posting a little later.
    7:28 pm. EST.
    New Jersey
Comment from Dr. Nad
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Hey Ricky, it sounds to me like maybe you have completed your book? If I am correct, congratulations are in order. Congratulations. As a three decades plus pastor, hospice chaplain, and hospital chaplain I think I have learned a little bit about grief and it's insidious tentacles. I am glad to see that you are continuing to write. This is most definitely one of the avenues by which one embraces the pain and the process and ultimately the progress toward one's wholeness.
I am wondering if there would be a desired editorial change here:
'"Poetry Defined." will take (you) through a journey going way back over six decades."

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
    I've lost half my vision in my left eye.
    So my grammars sloppy until I see da Eyeball Doc!
    "Doc Shock"!
    Thanks Doc.
    Remember who said that?
    Doctor Ricky 1024
    Note: This is book is one of hundreds in the making g.
reply by Dr. Nad on 06-Jul-2024
    Hey Ricky, one other thing, I noticed this piece was not copyrighted. I don't know if you normally copyright your material or not. For me, that is a huge thing that I always do even though I don't think anybody's after my stuff. L. O. L.
reply by Dr. Nad on 06-Jul-2024
    Hey Ricky, I don't know what is wrong with my eyes or my brain but it is copyrighted. I'm used in to seen the symbol of copyright and I didn't see the symbol. Sorry about that.