Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Once again, thank you for sharing.

Helter Shelter me and show for me (I'm curious here, did you mean Helter Skelter? I would think so because of the confusion element.)

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024

Correct my error.
Mansion was of course quite insane.
Doctor Ricky

Comment from Nicole Schmidt

Good

In a round about kinda way.
Yes, there is nothing kind abo7t the way that Eye died.
They say it was forced as if a cheap divorce.
Of course but Almoghty God. Above?
Shelter and show34 me with all your Inendibg Love?
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Yah know it was aad

This was slightly confusing to me..a few typos to fix I believe ð??? Best of luck.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024

This was a rush job while driving.
But thanks 4 da 4 stars and good luck with your writings.
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Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This fifty-word story, Death Becomes Me, uses an eerie skeletal presentation to reinforce the sense of doom in this sad story of the death of Eye. ...........................

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024

Well, first off.I'm glad you liked my skeletal.Pajamand thanks for your time.It's not finished.
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