Comment from
Michael Ludwinder
Well I think you accomplished the goal of this contest! haha. Tucker Carlson's transformation into a fish wearing his signature bow tie was quite different! Your use of rhyme adds a lighthearted tone to your poem that works so well. Very funny and enjoyable!
Comment Written 21-May-2024
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
Comment from
Pamusart
Hi. It is hard to come with a good fish story in so few words
Here
" Was he just now a fish bad guy"
What about
Was he now a fishy bad guy
See if you like it
This appears to be a good entry for the contest. Good luck.!!
Well done. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 19-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
thanks for the suggestion I will edit it accordingly