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Comment from
barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this poem with us. In the poem, I didn't notice any issues, just the notes.
Note: Marriage is a teo way mirror. (two)
Sometimes we need to realize that yes, we can see our image? (yes,)
But does thr person looking in from the other side? (the)
Comment Written 15-May-2024
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
Thanks Barbara and enjoy your day.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from
Dolly'sPoems
There needs to be compromise in marriage with an equal status between man and wife. Often the man is dominant and we have a lot of deaths occurring when the man kills his wife and I pray that this will change in the future. A poignant post Ricky, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 15-May-2024
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
Thanks Dolly.
Yes, and Equality along with Faith, Hope, Trust, and Finally...
Love.
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