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Flowering Love

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A book of my Love poems.

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Comment from Teri7
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Congratulations on your marriage. This is a very nice poem you have penned for your wife. You used very good imagery from the art work you chose. I will keep her in my prayers and you also my friend! Teri

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
    Always a pleasure and thanks for the review.
    Doctor Ricky
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I will pray for Dawn and for you. I'm confused. Is this the same person who you had the lawsuit against, a while back? I'm curious how that turned out. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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    I first met this woman it was at a kitchen on a Thursday at a Catholic church called Ken's kitchen who's a priest.
    Monsignor Ken has been doing his thing for quite a while he's a wonderful man he was there for me when I lost my first wife Carolyn.
    That meeting with Dawn was October 3rd 2023.
    Within two days she had called me for help and I brought her into the house where I used to live where all the trouble started.
    To a degree Dawn was part of the restraining order against me yes and yes I went to court Superior Court three times to break it the last time with my youngest daughter Dana.
    From January 13th Friday the 13th when I was illegally locked out until about May 29th I had no contact except legal with this woman.
    On May 29th something told her she claims it was her mother to turn the wheel towards Ken'skitchen again where I would arrive within minutes after her.
    The first thing I did was slam my writing book bag down on the table in front of her to get her attention.
    She put her arms around me and started telling me the story that she had been abused all those months and made a slave.
    Her car was taken and damaged she was locked into the bedroom you're with nails and screws to hold the window down.
    My own cat was abused and then eventually put in a shelter where I could not reclaim him.
    There was a significant ATD alarm system installed by the nice Jennifer who was the trouble of it all.
    Dawna said she was forced to drive her uncle Joseph around so all his doctor appointments and spend most of her disability on the household.
    Dawna also had an 18-month lease for close to $10,000 that I had no idea in my own friend's house in my known for 16 years.
    There are things that I'm slowly learning about this woman from her sister Tara.
    And yes there has been violence in this marriage and I at one point put a restraining order against her for about a month.
    The problem is she needs me more than I need myself.
    Thanks for reviewing this might help clear up the story a little bit more but there will be more to come.
    Unfortunately...
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reply by barbara.wilkey on 27-Feb-2024
    Thank you for sharing. I'm praying.
Comment from Gunner Lil
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A very enjoyable poem that this reader likes.
It is a very easy read that also has a fine pace with excellent flow.
Hope your wife gets home soon.

Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
    Thanks for stopping by Gunner it's been a long time.
    Doctor Ricky 1024