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You Will Never Know

148 word short story

2 total reviews 
Comment from lancellot
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Very interesting short scene. It sounds like Mary offed herself, and now Death is there to claim her soul. I guess she's going to the southside.


She shrugged, "The beauty of uncertainty
-She shrugged. "The beauty of uncertainty

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2024

Comment from Sueswrite
This work has reached the exceptional level

I have just read this poem for the third time and must admit, I am speechless, open jawed, and have travelled into a dimension of airtight involvement, feeling in my heart, 100%, that I rank #1 on your list of readers to connect and admittedly identify as if this were a purposely presented message placed in front of my eyes, to realize I am not alone with the confusion and wonder living in my solitude. Seriously, I get it, and if this is a perfect shadow of your mind-snap, then Holy Crap, I freaking love you! I hope you don't mind but I plan to hop onto your profile and scroll through your portfolio. I have so many secret thunderstorms that invade my starry nights and writing brings peace to the anger above . It is hard to express such immense realization that consumes our thoughts to people readers that do not identify with battling invisible chaos smothering life's joy. Perfection! All I can say!

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
    Thank you so much! You had me tearing up with this review! I'm glad you enjoyed it, I love writing things that are very emotional so it was so nice to see someone interested in reading! Feel free to check out my profile - I hope you like some of my other works!
reply by Sueswrite on 25-Feb-2024
    You are so very welcome and I completely get it...! If you have time, take a peek at my portfolio as well, and you will notice how we may connect... LOL! Best wishes!