Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao and welcome to fanstory 1

I have never been camping so no campfires in my lifetime.

Hypnotised, is a powerful descriptive word,

and that's how I feel when I am watching the flames in my fireplace dance in the dark.

I also love it when I load a new log and the fire roars.

I sleep on the couch in winter so I can fall asleep enjoying the fireworks.

PS; it's a shame you did not add a pic and the font should be bigger, there are many elderly members who will find it hard to read your fiery poem,

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024

thank you so much for the feedback, I agree its a shame I didn't add a pic, I didn't know I could as it was my first post, I will certainly learn for for more posts, also thank you for highlighting the font needing to be bigger, all good stuff :) have a lovely day.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 5-7-5, Campfire, has the proper formatting and finds the poet entranced by the dancing flames in the middle of the camping getaway ........................

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2024

thank you so much Bill. I really do appreciate the feedback, have a wonderful weekend and I look forward to reading some of your work.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a nice 575 poem that you have written for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a blessed weekend and may your dreams all come true. I'd also like to welcome you to fan story. Patricia .

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2024

Thank you Patricia, this was my first review and the feedback and the blessings are very much appreciated :)

reply by patcelaw on 17-Feb-2024

I am glad it was encouraging for you.