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Viewing comments for Chapter 54 "my pen whispers"keeping hope alive....
28 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
I read little poetry and don't know the first thing about it. But, like prose, or general conversations, it's basically words, which consume most minutes of everyone's days and keeps us up to date on what others think and feel. Great job! Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
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I read little poetry and don't know the first thing about it. But, like prose, or general conversations, it's basically words, which consume most minutes of everyone's days and keeps us up to date on what others think and feel. Great job! Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
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thank you for the review and stars... but (an fyi) it is against site rules to copy&paste reviews...
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From what I've seen on the site, rules were made to be broken. But I don't make it a habit. I just thought my remarks suited in this review as they did in the other. I don't just copy&paste to get Fan Dollars, since I already have more than I can ever spend. Thanks
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lol!
Comment from Jacob1395
I loved this piece. It is amazing how we can translate our thoughts and feelings onto the page. As far as we aware, we're the only living being that can do it. A well written piece. I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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I loved this piece. It is amazing how we can translate our thoughts and feelings onto the page. As far as we aware, we're the only living being that can do it. A well written piece. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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thank you jacob :-)
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there,
Thank you for sharing the rules of this poetic form. You did a great job of expressing a complete thought with just twelve words. I enjoyed reading this, and the deeper meaning behind the words. I love the idea of 'pen revealing my inner thoughts.'
I wish you well in the contest,
~MP~
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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Hi there,
Thank you for sharing the rules of this poetic form. You did a great job of expressing a complete thought with just twelve words. I enjoyed reading this, and the deeper meaning behind the words. I love the idea of 'pen revealing my inner thoughts.'
I wish you well in the contest,
~MP~
Comment Written 19-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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thank you patty :-)
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh, I like this poem very much -- in fact, I like the form, but how you have used it resonates with me deeply. As writers, we often express ourselves best with the written word, and what we write can be cathartic. Well done indeed! Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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Oh, I like this poem very much -- in fact, I like the form, but how you have used it resonates with me deeply. As writers, we often express ourselves best with the written word, and what we write can be cathartic. Well done indeed! Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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yup! thank you dawn :-)
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You're very welcome!
Comment from Lisasview
Great GOGYOHKA five line free style poem.
Yes, many that write voice their hidden thoughts through pen to paper.
Expressing what they truly feel**********
Thank you for sharing mystery writer and the very best of luck in the contest,
Lisa
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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Great GOGYOHKA five line free style poem.
Yes, many that write voice their hidden thoughts through pen to paper.
Expressing what they truly feel**********
Thank you for sharing mystery writer and the very best of luck in the contest,
Lisa
Comment Written 19-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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yup! thank you lisa :-)
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You are welcome!
Lisa
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent 12 Word Poetry Contest entry. Good word count and connection. Petty presentation and imagery.
I know what you mean. Writing can be very therapeutic.
Good job and Goodluck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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Excellent 12 Word Poetry Contest entry. Good word count and connection. Petty presentation and imagery.
I know what you mean. Writing can be very therapeutic.
Good job and Goodluck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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so true! thank you gypsy :-)
Comment from tfawcus
The way you have arranged this, with the first part somewhat prolix and the second part a precise summary, gives a visual impression on the page of wandering thoughts being captured and pinned down. Impactful, I thought.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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The way you have arranged this, with the first part somewhat prolix and the second part a precise summary, gives a visual impression on the page of wandering thoughts being captured and pinned down. Impactful, I thought.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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thank you tf :-)
Comment from Karen Cherry
Nicely done. It seems the Japenese do not care for rhyming at all. As usual you get your point across without having to baldly state the fact. good luck. good work. Karen
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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Nicely done. It seems the Japenese do not care for rhyming at all. As usual you get your point across without having to baldly state the fact. good luck. good work. Karen
Comment Written 19-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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i suppose they don't... hmm interesting... thank you! karen :-)
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U R Welcome. :-)
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi MA . Yes a great 12 words very apt and captures the thought in written word a clever post and good luck in the contest should win so all the best
Cheers Chris
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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Hi MA . Yes a great 12 words very apt and captures the thought in written word a clever post and good luck in the contest should win so all the best
Cheers Chris
Comment Written 18-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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thank you chris :-)
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Like your poem. Anything about the written word is wonderful to read. We do enjoy our thinking words; they are our thoughts and ideas which makes it even more pleasant.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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Like your poem. Anything about the written word is wonderful to read. We do enjoy our thinking words; they are our thoughts and ideas which makes it even more pleasant.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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so true! thank you rosemary :-)
