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Lair Of The Seductress

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Book Four Wolf Bend Series

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Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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OMG Never invite someone named Lilith to come into your house, your truck or whatever!! Crazy men! Consider me all in on this new book! I better check out the others. Good luck.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
    My series has been called a Goose Bumps for adults. (Only by two people, but that still counts!)

    This is Book 4 in the Wolf Bend Series. There will be one more book.
    D
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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Holy moly! I was going to read your story when I realized it wasn't your first one and had to go back.
This stuff is good. Not my normal reading choice, but good just the same. Karen

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
    Thanks, Karen. It is the fourth book in the Wolf Bend series. They are fun.
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 21-Jan-2024
    I will eventually have to read it all you know. I am that way. But since it is no points it will take me a while. :-) Karen
Comment from jmdg1954
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Phew. Glad I'm not a trucker. Not that I would partake in those extra curricular activities! No way!

He got what he deserved, I guess...

I have not read the previous books so hopefully I can keep up.

Cheers,
John

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2024
    Hope so! The notes in Chapter two explain some things. Appreciate you taking the time to review!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Intriguing thriller with a great betrayal, sex, and crime plot... somethingfor everybody lol.... wonderful dialog and character development. The story is very intense and engaging. You have a very creative mind.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2024
    Appreciate your awesome comments, my friend. Your opinion is important to me as I so greatly respect your talent.
    Douglas
Comment from LJbutterfly
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This is definite horror in the night. It looks like Lilith is a cheating husband vigilante out to inflict punishment on men looking for a quick extra marital sexual encounter. She even makes them pay cash first. Question. What was the bright red light that erupted inside the cab?

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2024
    Hi! So this Wolf Bend Series is like a Goose Bumps for adults. The adversaries in the first three books were all paranormal. Lilith did appear in book three as a secondary character, but in this book she is the nemesis. Hopefully you jump in again.
    D
Comment from Navada
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Wow! This is what you get when you decide to stray from the path and cheat on your wife. Serves you right, Bernie - you should have known better! The uttering of the spell and the bright red light at the end are intriguing and lead the reader to want to find out more.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2024
    Yeppers. Hope you follow along. This one is going to be a bumpy ride!
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Well, I must say you sure had this old boy's attention, but now you have me afraid to pull into a truck stop. LOL. Great chapter, and I just wish I had a six to reward it properly. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2024
    Thanks, Rick. Appreciate you!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Lilith is pure evil. Greg is going to have his hands full with her. I can't wait to read more. I WAS considering entering this contest with my new novel, but after reading this one, I am pretty sure I don't have a chance. I won't be finished with Seth and Emma for a while maybe I'll just wait. LOL Good luck with the contest.

just because the man's wife went into labor he had to cover the overnight route (OH MY!!! He should be a fun character to read about. Comma needed after 'labor,'.)

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
    Thanks, Barbara! I'm afraid poor Bernie may be done. Ha!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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Oh no. Did Bernie move on? You know to a world beyond? I feel as if I was left hanging. Now you need to elaborate? Are we to feel Meredith's rage? idk where this is heading and the only thought I had was the photo leading in, though right could have been of a honey in a black leather mini-skirt wearing stockings.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
    HA! A honey in a leather mini-skirt. This book is more up your alley. We are back to Greg and Jenny. Hope you tag along, my friend!
reply by Tom Horonzy on 14-Jan-2024
    Until I read this piece I had forgotten what you wrote, but Greg and Jenny's names had me recall and I must say I am glad ... you are alive and somewhat well.
    :-)
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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I had a feeling it was going to end like that. Things were going so well for Bernie. But, wow, this is excellent! You build up tension with your impressive command of dialogue and expand the sexual theme of this without once disappearing down a hole of gratuitous description (as some might do). You've hooked me in with this well expressed story which is a very strong contender in my humble opinion. Well done, Doug! Good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2024
    You are too kind! I don't worry too much about committee contest wins. I need a lot more work at editing, structure, and such before they will shine the spotlight on me. Regardless, i do respect your opinion and appreciate your wonderful review.
    Douglas