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A Kiss In Time

a kiss that speaks

5 total reviews 
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Lobber,
This is a beautiful love poem. It uses accent as a metaphor for the feeling of love which is an metaphor I haven't seen before. It also reminds us to the power of silence as a conduit of love and other emotions.
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2024

Comment from Lea Tonin1
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I really good entry for the loop poem contest great job! It's the fine example of this kind poem as well You have sublime word choices and that picture is pretty cool too! I see no issues with grammar sentence structure or subject matter I hope your holidays wonderful and continues to be!

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2023

Comment from Sugarray77
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Very, very nice, Jer. I loved your loop poem and liked ebb and flow of feeling. Your repeating word is seamless and does not cause friction or hesitation. Very nicely done... good luck.

Melissa

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2023

reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023
    Hi Melissa, sorry I?m getting behind with my thank you?s.
    I always find the loop poem a bit of a challenge. I?ve learned to keep it "short stupid" so I can get over it faster

    As for my naked Fraser Fir haiku, Spartan is always better, especially with decorations.

    I?m fighting "once again" my annual Christmas stay in the hospital. I?m on IV at the clinic for the last six days, but at least I?ve been able to avoid the emergency room.

    Then there is my fantasy and space era piece! Bobbing for heads is always a delightful Christmas game, especially for children. Glad you like it?. probably too gruesome for the judges, but not the kids.

    My best to you and your family this strangely warm Christmas. Santa will need water boards for his deliveries.

    A big brotherly hug from me to you under the mistletoe.
    - Jerry
Comment from gramalot8
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Great entry for the loop poem. Wonderful way you used the last word/ first word requirement.
Great visual of great kisses with your expressive words. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2023

Comment from patcelaw
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You have done well with your short loop point. Wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a wonderful Christmas and a happy and prosperous new year.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2023