2023 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 44 "The Power you Have Over Me".
8 total reviews
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem. Gypsy.....and that there is some mighty powerful love action! Count yourself lucky if you find it. No such luck for me. Thought I had it, but it exploded in my face like a pipe bomb of the damned!
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
Another fine poem. Gypsy.....and that there is some mighty powerful love action! Count yourself lucky if you find it. No such luck for me. Thought I had it, but it exploded in my face like a pipe bomb of the damned!
Comment Written 12-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
This was awesome, Gypsy. I loved the pictures of the lone girl followed by the wave showing a tunnel in the waves. Your words indicated that they were true in that you loved him. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
This was awesome, Gypsy. I loved the pictures of the lone girl followed by the wave showing a tunnel in the waves. Your words indicated that they were true in that you loved him. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 12-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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You are so welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from GWHARGIS
Ah! The power of live. True love can be like that forever. Lust can be like that briefly. I love how the elements of earth and heaven seem to be against it. Great poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
Ah! The power of live. True love can be like that forever. Lust can be like that briefly. I love how the elements of earth and heaven seem to be against it. Great poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 12-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
No, you don't sound like a stalker, but you do sound like someone who loves deeply and that's a really good thing. More people need to love that deeply. Thank you for sharing this wonderful presentation.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
No, you don't sound like a stalker, but you do sound like someone who loves deeply and that's a really good thing. More people need to love that deeply. Thank you for sharing this wonderful presentation.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
You've covered all the basic elements of Earth, Wind, Fire, and Water. And none of these will keep the narrator away from her beloved. That's quite the dramatic way to express that devotion!
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
You've covered all the basic elements of Earth, Wind, Fire, and Water. And none of these will keep the narrator away from her beloved. That's quite the dramatic way to express that devotion!
Comment Written 11-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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LoL Yes I can be over dramatic sometimes.
Thank you very much big sister. (*÷*)
Love
Marival
Comment from karenina
Stalker? You sound like one in love and determined to go the full journey to experience it! The image, the color of the font...everything you say of nature's forces which may try to deny you. Hah. I have my money on poetic love and drama!
Karenina
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
Stalker? You sound like one in love and determined to go the full journey to experience it! The image, the color of the font...everything you say of nature's forces which may try to deny you. Hah. I have my money on poetic love and drama!
Karenina
Comment Written 11-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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Thank you, Sister Karenina, I really appreciate the exceptional six stars review and kind words. I am happy you understand my coo coo pants craziness. I don't know if people know that Spaniards are very dramatic. It's one of the reasons I love tanka poems, they are the same... dramatic and very passionate. I feel a kinship with Japanese women tanka poets from the 8th to the 12th century -- Ono no Komachi and Izumi Shikibu. We write similarly.
Love you,
MariVal
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Embrace the drama and passion! It keeps us young!
Comment from gramalot8
There definitely can be actions from a stalker that would epitomize having a hold on a person.
But I like to dwell on the idea of your poem... that one can be lovingly obsessed with another in s pure and love intended manner.
Thanks for sharing this thought provoking poem with us.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
There definitely can be actions from a stalker that would epitomize having a hold on a person.
But I like to dwell on the idea of your poem... that one can be lovingly obsessed with another in s pure and love intended manner.
Thanks for sharing this thought provoking poem with us.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent and kind review. May you have a lovely day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
LOL at your stalker comment! reminds me of the police song "every breath you take"!
this was a great free verse with good imagery and smooth flow
i liked how you put all the elements in and natural disasters, too
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
LOL at your stalker comment! reminds me of the police song "every breath you take"!
this was a great free verse with good imagery and smooth flow
i liked how you put all the elements in and natural disasters, too
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 11-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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lol Thank you very much for your excellent and kind review. May you have a lovely day.
Gypsy hugs