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2023 Gypsy's Free Verse

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Comment from Mike Stevens
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Another fine poem. Gypsy.....and that there is some mighty powerful love action! Count yourself lucky if you find it. No such luck for me. Thought I had it, but it exploded in my face like a pipe bomb of the damned!

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
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This was awesome, Gypsy. I loved the pictures of the lone girl followed by the wave showing a tunnel in the waves. Your words indicated that they were true in that you loved him. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by aryr on 12-Dec-2023
    You are so welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from GWHARGIS
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Ah! The power of live. True love can be like that forever. Lust can be like that briefly. I love how the elements of earth and heaven seem to be against it. Great poem. Gretchen

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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No, you don't sound like a stalker, but you do sound like someone who loves deeply and that's a really good thing. More people need to love that deeply. Thank you for sharing this wonderful presentation.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
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You've covered all the basic elements of Earth, Wind, Fire, and Water. And none of these will keep the narrator away from her beloved. That's quite the dramatic way to express that devotion!

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
    LoL Yes I can be over dramatic sometimes.

    Thank you very much big sister. (*÷*)

    Love

    Marival
Comment from karenina
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Stalker? You sound like one in love and determined to go the full journey to experience it! The image, the color of the font...everything you say of nature's forces which may try to deny you. Hah. I have my money on poetic love and drama!

Karenina

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
    Thank you, Sister Karenina, I really appreciate the exceptional six stars review and kind words. I am happy you understand my coo coo pants craziness. I don't know if people know that Spaniards are very dramatic. It's one of the reasons I love tanka poems, they are the same... dramatic and very passionate. I feel a kinship with Japanese women tanka poets from the 8th to the 12th century -- Ono no Komachi and Izumi Shikibu. We write similarly.

    Love you,
    MariVal
reply by karenina on 12-Dec-2023
    Embrace the drama and passion! It keeps us young!
Comment from gramalot8
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There definitely can be actions from a stalker that would epitomize having a hold on a person.
But I like to dwell on the idea of your poem... that one can be lovingly obsessed with another in s pure and love intended manner.
Thanks for sharing this thought provoking poem with us.

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent and kind review. May you have a lovely day.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
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LOL at your stalker comment! reminds me of the police song "every breath you take"!

this was a great free verse with good imagery and smooth flow
i liked how you put all the elements in and natural disasters, too

thank you for sharing
shelley :)


 Comment Written 11-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
    lol Thank you very much for your excellent and kind review. May you have a lovely day.

    Gypsy hugs