Miss Take
The SIMPle Life3 total reviews
Comment from rama devi
AMUSING WITTY PUNS AND RHYMES, MY FRIEND....masterfully crafted. The shorter lines give it a bouncy beat.
Most clever, favorite lines:
I'm holding on to letting go,
When lost in love, I love to lose,
The title is 'punny' too.
Warmly,
rd
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2023
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AMUSING WITTY PUNS AND RHYMES, MY FRIEND....masterfully crafted. The shorter lines give it a bouncy beat.
Most clever, favorite lines:
I'm holding on to letting go,
When lost in love, I love to lose,
The title is 'punny' too.
Warmly,
rd
Comment Written 09-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much, my friend. The Muse has been active lately.
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I'm so glad! Hope to see more of your work - if not here, then on FB xxoo
Comment from Wendyanne
It's great to see you posting your wonderful poetry again if only for a while David. As always, this is a very well written piece of rhyming poetry. "A queen will tax a pawn". Very true! Well done.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2023
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It's great to see you posting your wonderful poetry again if only for a while David. As always, this is a very well written piece of rhyming poetry. "A queen will tax a pawn". Very true! Well done.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2023
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How great to hear from you, Wendy. I hope all is well. Thank you!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I liked reading this. It was cleverly worded and had great meter and rhyme. Here is a line that also made me smile:
So learn from the unfairer sex,
Another part I liked was:
I spend the hope tomorrow brings
By going broke today.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2023
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I liked reading this. It was cleverly worded and had great meter and rhyme. Here is a line that also made me smile:
So learn from the unfairer sex,
Another part I liked was:
I spend the hope tomorrow brings
By going broke today.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much.