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Faeries

For all that believe in Faeries

28 total reviews 
Comment from Jessica Wheeler
Exceptional
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This is just beautiful. I must read it to my girls, they will adore it! I love the calming and magical tone here, and your rhyme scheme is gorgeous! Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece! Xo
Jessica

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
    Wow, what a very wonderful thing to say... I just love the whole idea of Faeries... and Nymphs...
    I did write a poem called Nymph that you might like... I won that contest... but not this one.
    Lisa
Comment from jim vecchio
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I've fallen a bit behind but am glad I found this. You taught me a lot about fairies, and also shown me your expertise at a form of poetry I haven't tried as yet. Thank you for your notes, as well. You make everything look so easy, and yet are so professional!

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
    I am into my work looking professional Jim but even so I did not win ... Got a ton of reviews and so appreciate yours... and your noticing that I do work on the poems I post...
    Lisa
reply by jim vecchio on 27-Nov-2023
    Your work and your expertise are very evident!
Comment from Sarita Méndez
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This is a very nice poem, with a lovely imagery. I can "see" the scenes you describe in your lines and I feel taken to this world when I read this.
Thnak you very much for sharing this beautiful text and good luck for the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 24-Nov-2023
    Good morning Sarita,
    What a lovely review...glad my poem had an impact on you... That is what poems are meant to do... so it makes me so happy when readers feel something.
    Did you happen to read my poem Nymph?
    I think you might like that one as well,
    Lisa
Comment from Goodadvicechan
Exceptional
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I like the picture. It is lovely and brings hope for a new day. .

Fairies brighten everything, the environment, Events, attitudes.
Early in the morning is the driving force of each day.
You have captured these two items in your beautiful poem.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
    What a very lovely review...thank you so much for taking the time to read and review... I do have another fun poem Nymph that I think you might like...
    Lisasview
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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Lovely writing of course. I find the white highlighting distracting. Perhaps if you switched the type color to forest green? Does this poetry form have a name?
I am learning so much here. I have tried everything in the world to get this printer to set up. It refuses. Now I am fighting for a refund. Have a good week. Karen

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
    I am so sorry to hear about your printer... what a nightmare...
    The poem is written in Bi-Trillets...
    and green might have worked too..
    The issue with the white is that it is there when I copy and paste my poems... In the past I have retyped my poems and not copied and pated. But, as today is the deadline I just did not have the time.
    And, I got a couple of reviews saying that they liked the white... strange..
    Lisa
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 21-Nov-2023
    Another one I never heard of.
    Boy, this is some learning curve. Sometimes FanStory highlights without telling
    you. That's why I mentioned
    it. Karen
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
    Yes, whenever I copy and paste that is what happens...
    Actually my Faerie poem is my original... I then write a second one called Faeries ~ take two
    I should have posted that one for the contest...oh well.. haste makes waste...
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 21-Nov-2023
    Have a good week. Karen
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
    I was able toget rid of the white that drove me nuts and I changed the image..
    Lisa
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 22-Nov-2023
    waybetter
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2023
    What a nightmare and hours of work.... Glad you like it.
    Lisa
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 23-Nov-2023
    It looks way better. Happy Turkey Day Karen
Comment from Barry Penfold
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Nice contest entry. Just imagine if Faeries did exist. I would never mow my lawn again. All the best in the contest. Take care and have a wonderful day.
All the best
Barry Penfold.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
    You are very funny and your review made me smile!
    Thank you,
    Lisa
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A magical post full of those mythical fairies and I am glad you didn't grow out of your Mother's teachings as we all need to believe in some fantasy to escape reality, a fine post with good rhymes and flow, Lisa, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
    Thank you so much Dolly... She often spoke of getting up early and seeing the faerie rings around the tree in the woods by her house in Manchester...
    Lisa
Comment from Wendy G
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There is a world of imagination and mystery to be enjoyed with belief in fairies. Beautifully written and presented. Best wishes for the contest. There is one time you used "fairies" but it may be better to use consistently "faeries". Just a thought.
Wendy

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
    Thank you again!!! I actually found that I spelled it wrong twice!!!
    I love it when someone spots a typo... Although I have 17 reviews you are the only one to spot it...
    Lisa
Comment from Lea Tonin1
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Faerie games how much fun with that be? A well written poem with a beautiful picture too! I also like the script you chose against the back. Drop makes it very soft and inviting. I see no issues with grammar static's sentence structure or subject matter. I think you've got a great entry for the submission have a fabulous evening!

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
    Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my Faerie poem.
    Lisa
Comment from harmony13
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The author's words are a delight to read. The poem flows and connects
well. The rhyming is perfect as it paints a picture of the scene! The
artwork is awesome and compliments the words and theme of this poem.
Hi Lisa, have a great week!...Maria

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
    Such a delightful review to my poemdear maria. Thank you so very much!!
    Lisa
reply by harmony13 on 21-Nov-2023
    Happy Thanksgiving, Lisa!