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Comment from Bill Schott
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This birthday greeting for Annmuma is a cool poem that tracks Ann's ups and downs these eighty years. I wish to live to one hundred as well, but may have to settle for just under.

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
    Hi Bill, you are so kind. I truly appreciate all the sweet words for our awesome Ann and her poem. She too will enjoy reading these and all the kind birthday greetings. Thanks again, my awesome friend.
    Debi
Comment from Pam (respa)
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Very nice artwork and presentation, Debi. A well written tribute to Ann. You always do a good job with these. I don't see how you make details poetic, but you have a knack for it. I enjoyed learning about Ann, her family, and plans. Well done.

Congratulations, Ann, on your eightieth birthday. It was interesting reading about you and your family, as well as your interests. I am glad you have your grandkids and your watchdog to help out.

You have had an admirable career and you must be very proud of that. Congratulations on your upcoming retirement. It sounds like it is very well deserved. Best wishes for your birthday.

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
    Hi Pam. you are so kind. I truly appreciate all the sweet words for our awesome Ann and her poem. She too will enjoy reading these and all the kind birthday greetings. Thanks again, my awesome friend.
    Debi
reply by Pam (respa) on 14-Nov-2023
    You are very welcome, awesome friend.
    😊😊
Comment from jake cosmos aller
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another great poetic birthday happy birthday. your tributes bring out the character of the person portrayed. Well done. I can see Ann living there 80 years old something I hope to achieve,

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 Comment Written 13-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
    Hi Jake, you are so kind. As soon as things slow down just a bit for me I will contact you and see if I can start some of your wonderful ideas.
    I truly appreciate all the awesome words for our Ann and her poem. She too will enjoy reading these and all the kind birthday greetings. Thanks again, my awesome friend.
    Debi
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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I don't think I know Ann but this is an excellent poem. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that truly make a wonderful birthday tribute. Happy Birthday too!!

Best wishes,

Alex

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
    Alex .you are so kind. I truly appreciate all the sweet words for our awesome, Ann and her poem. She too will enjoy reading these and all the kind birthday greetings. Thanks again, my awesome friend.
    Debi
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Thank you for introducing me to yet another fanstorian. It must take you a long time to research and then write a long beautiful poem. Where do you find the time? Well done my friend.


Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
    Thanks so much Gypsy. You are always so sweet and I appreciate your very kind comments. Thanks again!
Comment from Bridge
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A wonderful tribute to a friend. I enjoyed reading the poem. I am generally curious about others. I think you have responded to the prompt well. thank you for sharing with us. I wish you the very best. With kind regards

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
    Hi Bridge, I truly appreciate all the sweet words for our awesome, Ann and her poem. She too will enjoy reading these and all the kind birthday greetings. Thanks again, my awesome friend.
    Debi
Comment from l.raven
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Hi Debi, another great choice of music beautiful you...
I have read Ann's writings...and she's a very talented
writer...she sounds like she has had a very full life...
with some bad times...and I'm so sorry for her losses...
but so glad she has her family to be there for her...

SO I WISH HER A HAPPY BIRTHDAY...and soooo many more...

I love your poem my wonderful friend...and love your picture..
tis the season...very nicely written to a wonderful lady...
and I soooo love your choice of videos...
love much...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
    Hi Linda, you are so kind. I truly appreciate all the sweet words for our awesome, Ann and her poem. She too will enjoy reading these and all the kind birthday greetings. Thanks again, my awesome friend.
    Debi
reply by l.raven on 13-Nov-2023
    you beautiful girl are so very welcome...much love...xxoo 💖🤗🥰🙏🌼
Comment from Navada
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This is another lovely tribute to one of your friends. You are clearly such a kind and generous person, Debi. I see that one of your friends has written of their admiration for you in the Secret Admirer Contest recently. Well deserved!

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
    Navada,.you are so kind. I truly appreciate all the sweet words for our awesome, Ann and her poem. She too will enjoy reading these and all the kind birthday greetings. Thanks again, my awesome friend.
    Debi
Comment from Father Flaps
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Hi Debi,
Another fine birthday poem! I've never run across Annmuma. She's been a member of Fanstory since 2007. I joined in 2010, yet our paths never crossed. I will rectify that ASAP. She's had a lot of heartache, losing two husbands. But it sounds like Ann enjoys her grandkids, and her insurance agency. She has earned a good retirement now at 80 years young! She worked 10 years longer than me!
I especially liked your "interlude" lines,
"But thankfully she is a Gran; Five grandkids brightened days for Ann"
"She has another caring man, her brother, John, is there for Ann"
"Off to casino when she can; An outing that is fun for Ann"
"At FanStory, I am her fan, I treasure my friendship with Ann"
These break up the poem nicely.
Thanks for introducing this young-at-heart lady.
Hugs,
Kimbob

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
    Awe, kimbob ? I'm so glad you like my merry- go-rhymes.. I truly appreciate all the sweet words for our awesome, Ann and her poem. She too will enjoy reading these and all the kind birthday greetings. And thank you for the honor of your six stars! Thanks again, my awesome friend.
    Debi
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
    I sure hope you are getting that horrible tooth taken care of and that you are feeling better.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
    I sure hope you are getting that horrible tooth taken care of and that you are feeling better.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
    Oops. Hit save too many times
Comment from jim vecchio
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I am very thankful and consider myself fortunate to have read yet another birthday poem. I know it's hard for you, and you're not a complainer like me. and yet, you consistently turn out such quality work. I am amazed once more!

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
    Jim, you are so kind. I truly appreciate all the sweet words for our awesome, Ann and her poem. She too will enjoy reading these and all the kind birthday greetings. Thanks again, my awesome friend.
    Debi
reply by jim vecchio on 12-Nov-2023
    Please be well and, whenever it's possible, write, as I would miss your posts terribly!