Seconds Count
Do what can and should be done3 total reviews
Comment from Gloria ....
Your artwork choice is striking with a skeleton hand and fleshed hand, both holding time in their own way.
Yes, every second does count if one's passing doesn't arrive too soon accidentally.
Wishing you much luck with the Contest Committee. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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Your artwork choice is striking with a skeleton hand and fleshed hand, both holding time in their own way.
Yes, every second does count if one's passing doesn't arrive too soon accidentally.
Wishing you much luck with the Contest Committee. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 04-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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Thank you Gloria for, once again , boosting my writing.
With my physical challenges I find writing helps me cope.
Comment from Wendyanne
Well they say "Every second counts" and you have emphasised that message very well in this little six word 'poem.' I enjoyed your use of rhyme and I like the use of the word 'manoeuver'
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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Well they say "Every second counts" and you have emphasised that message very well in this little six word 'poem.' I enjoyed your use of rhyme and I like the use of the word 'manoeuver'
Comment Written 04-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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Wendy, your boosting review is much appreciated. Thank you.
Comment from patcelaw
It is important that we make every second of our discount. I joined your short poem of six words. I hope you have a wonderful day and you will make all of your seconds count as well. Patricia.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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It is important that we make every second of our discount. I joined your short poem of six words. I hope you have a wonderful day and you will make all of your seconds count as well. Patricia.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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Your heartwarming review gave me a couple of wonderful days. I put my wakeful seconds into decluttering. Best wishes Daphne
