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Petals

The sweetness of petals

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Comment from Raul1
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No mistakes found. I like it. Good luck on the contest! Nice job!

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2023

Comment from Eternal Muse
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This is so romantic and so metaphorical.

Liked "perfumed love "

Loved the image of blossoming tree. A gorgeous presentation and picture.

A delightful read.

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2023

Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Jane,
This short poem has a strong extended metaphor with the leaves and their scent as the way a person love effects you as it grows.
Good luck in the contest,
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day.
Joan

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2023

Comment from kiwisteveh
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Hi, Jane. Your wee 5-7-7 poem does a great job of meeting the prompt here and should fare well in this contest. Your use of the word 'your' in the final line is important in terms of making sure that the poem is actually 'addressed' to your loved one, as required.

I like the phrase perfumed love and the comparison to fragrant blossoms.

Good luck.

Steve

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2023

Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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Your poetry was nice and sweet. The font you picked was on the money. The color of the type blended in nicely with the picture. The matting background was well selected. And, the picture selected was a perfect compliment to your words. Karen

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2023

Comment from Barry Penfold
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A sweet love poem. Lovely image and your words flow well. Difficult to really get going with a three line poem. You have done well. Best of luck.
Best of luck in the contest.
Regards
Barry Penfold.

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2023