broken circle
My personal 911 moment.6 total reviews
Comment from walk.write.reflect
It is an emotional piece that skillfully delves into the intricate layers of relationships. Your words powerfully exude a raw sincerity that allows the emotions to overflow onto the page deeply. I can feel the pain and vulnerability that accompany them. Thank you for sharing.
Best Regards.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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It is an emotional piece that skillfully delves into the intricate layers of relationships. Your words powerfully exude a raw sincerity that allows the emotions to overflow onto the page deeply. I can feel the pain and vulnerability that accompany them. Thank you for sharing.
Best Regards.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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thank you
Comment from karenina
Another powerful poem from your pen. One little glitch with:
"OfCourse there will be times you..." (need that space between Of and Course)
This must have been a very painful and emotionally abusive relationship--if not more.
I find writing to be the best possible therapy!
(And just think -- you touch other souls who've walked this painful path)
Karenina
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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Another powerful poem from your pen. One little glitch with:
"OfCourse there will be times you..." (need that space between Of and Course)
This must have been a very painful and emotionally abusive relationship--if not more.
I find writing to be the best possible therapy!
(And just think -- you touch other souls who've walked this painful path)
Karenina
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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thank you
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Welcome!
Comment from Ricky1024
This was touching, as well, written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
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My Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional descriptive measures aligned perfectly.
Thanks for sharing this and have a Blessed day!
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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This was touching, as well, written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
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My Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional descriptive measures aligned perfectly.
Thanks for sharing this and have a Blessed day!
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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thanx rick ...I appreciate it with utmost respect for our craft.
Comment from jim vecchio
I am sorry you experienced a "911 moment". In college, college thought I loved someone and felt that terrible hurt. But when I met my wife, we greed marriage is from God and there is no turning back. Of course, had I not been the husband I could be, she said she'd move away, but still be my wife. We were together for 31 years, had a renewal of vows, and I never regretted it!
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
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I am sorry you experienced a "911 moment". In college, college thought I loved someone and felt that terrible hurt. But when I met my wife, we greed marriage is from God and there is no turning back. Of course, had I not been the husband I could be, she said she'd move away, but still be my wife. We were together for 31 years, had a renewal of vows, and I never regretted it!
Comment Written 20-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
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thank you
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Thank you also! Keep writing!
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Is this about abuse? Maybe due to my past that I left over thirty years ago, but I feel it is. If it's not about abuse I'm lost. Excellent writing. Please let me know so I can reread. Best wishes to you!
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2023
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Is this about abuse? Maybe due to my past that I left over thirty years ago, but I feel it is. If it's not about abuse I'm lost. Excellent writing. Please let me know so I can reread. Best wishes to you!
Comment Written 18-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2023
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Again I thank you young lady. yes.so Much abuse.
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I'm sorry. I've been there when I was in my 20s. I see you fanned me. Thank you . I look to fan you tomorrow. :)
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Haunting but beautiful. I agree there are times when hate sustains you. Sometimes it is all you have, you rely on it to hold you up.
Hate becomes your friend you rely on it. You can trust hate. It becomes a kind of love in a way. Hate consumes.You wrote clearly and it threw me back into my past when hate was my dear friend. Keep writing. you are good.
Karen
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2023
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Haunting but beautiful. I agree there are times when hate sustains you. Sometimes it is all you have, you rely on it to hold you up.
Hate becomes your friend you rely on it. You can trust hate. It becomes a kind of love in a way. Hate consumes.You wrote clearly and it threw me back into my past when hate was my dear friend. Keep writing. you are good.
Karen
Comment Written 17-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2023
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I appreciate the push..I need that so, much. Thank you
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We writers are a odd bunch.
We feel things so deeply. Before FanStory I talked to no one about my work. This place sustains me. You will find like minds here. All of us are half mad in our own special way. But most of us, not all of us, will help however we can. Keep writing. Don't parse it out.
Karen