Fairy Tales
We wanted a fairy tale life.41 total reviews
Comment from walk.write.reflect
This story is truly captivating and emotionally powerful. Its genuine and realistic portrayal has deeply touched me. The way it unfolds and engages with the human experience is simply enchanting. I am drawn to this narrative and its impactful message. Thank you for sharing this impactful piece.
Best Wishes in the contest.
Best Regards.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023
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This story is truly captivating and emotionally powerful. Its genuine and realistic portrayal has deeply touched me. The way it unfolds and engages with the human experience is simply enchanting. I am drawn to this narrative and its impactful message. Thank you for sharing this impactful piece.
Best Wishes in the contest.
Best Regards.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023
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Thank you. Sandy and I spent most of our childhood years together. I some ways, I was closer to Sandy than my own sisters.
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is a beautiful well written story of loyal, everlasting friendship. You gave detailed background information that helped the reader understand the relationship between you and Sandy. Your story progressed clearly and smoothly, leading to the final realization that fairy tales do not come true in the way little girls dream of. Great writing. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023
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This is a beautiful well written story of loyal, everlasting friendship. You gave detailed background information that helped the reader understand the relationship between you and Sandy. Your story progressed clearly and smoothly, leading to the final realization that fairy tales do not come true in the way little girls dream of. Great writing. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023
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Thank you. Maybe some folks have fairy tale lives, but Sandy and I sure didn't. I was content with my farmer husband, but Sandy never did find that special someone.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Friends are (can be) closer than brothers (sisters).
Terrific writing. (At this point I changed the rating from five to six stars. How can it be terrific and not be awarded the sixth star?)
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023
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Friends are (can be) closer than brothers (sisters).
Terrific writing. (At this point I changed the rating from five to six stars. How can it be terrific and not be awarded the sixth star?)
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023
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Thank you. In some ways I was closer to Sandy than my own sisters. Istill care about her today. Thanks for the six stars. I will tell Sandy her story earned the highest rating.
Comment from karenina
What a well-written essay/non-fiction tale! It is a shame that back then we were conditioned to look for our "prince" and (heaven forbid) ever thought that just being ourselves ought to be perfectly fulfilling! So many of us chased that elusive dream. How tragic, the suicide! I do not know how Sandy got through it. I suppose we must! Regardless of how our childhood dreams play out, isn't it nice to know some friendships span all time? Love this...
Karenina
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023
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What a well-written essay/non-fiction tale! It is a shame that back then we were conditioned to look for our "prince" and (heaven forbid) ever thought that just being ourselves ought to be perfectly fulfilling! So many of us chased that elusive dream. How tragic, the suicide! I do not know how Sandy got through it. I suppose we must! Regardless of how our childhood dreams play out, isn't it nice to know some friendships span all time? Love this...
Karenina
Comment Written 16-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023
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Thank you. Yes, I was raised in an era where the man took care of the family while the women stayed home to care for the children and household. My father made all the decisions and paid the bills. My mother didn't even know how to write a check after my father passed away.
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I was raised in the same era...
Not many can afford to stay home these days!
(Come to think of it, a castle with no mortgage would be sweet!)
Comment from Sally Law
Aw, you're such a wonderful friend. Sandy is blessed to have you in her life now more than ever. A sweet story for the contest. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally :))
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023
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Aw, you're such a wonderful friend. Sandy is blessed to have you in her life now more than ever. A sweet story for the contest. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally :))
Comment Written 16-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023
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Thank you. Sandy has some wonderful children who will always care for her. They must have had a tough life without their father and all the different men as stepfathers. They have all done well in their lives despite the rough start.
Comment from Annmuma
A touching story and a wonderful contest entry. The story is well-written and the emotions can be felt. the characters and the scenes are deftly drawn. Good job. Good luck in the contest. ann
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023
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A touching story and a wonderful contest entry. The story is well-written and the emotions can be felt. the characters and the scenes are deftly drawn. Good job. Good luck in the contest. ann
Comment Written 16-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023
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Thank you. Sandy is a good person. I found it sad that she could not seem to find the right person throughout her life.
Comment from royowen
I guess we all have higher than heaven expectations, the truth is it's still better to give than receive, and if we want a fairy tale world, we can at least have half with our own efforts. Many men still love, despite imperfection. A friend of mine once wisely, "if you want a friend, be a friend" I think the same applies both ways. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Typo : Had yet to find (out) Prince. Our?
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023
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I guess we all have higher than heaven expectations, the truth is it's still better to give than receive, and if we want a fairy tale world, we can at least have half with our own efforts. Many men still love, despite imperfection. A friend of mine once wisely, "if you want a friend, be a friend" I think the same applies both ways. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Typo : Had yet to find (out) Prince. Our?
Comment Written 16-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023
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Thank you. I often have thought of the saying you mention about friends. I think Sandy expected a man to make her happy, but no one person can make another happy or unhappy unless that individual lets them. Happiness is free if you look for it.
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Thanks dear friend
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Damn it, and I was searching for the one :) "
Sandy laughed, "I guess I never gave up looking for my prince. I wanted a man who would treat me like a princess, but I finally had to concede that there is no such thing. Brandon gave it his best shot, but I grew tired of his pathetic efforts. There are no princes left in the world today." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your friendship and contest.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023
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Damn it, and I was searching for the one :) "
Sandy laughed, "I guess I never gave up looking for my prince. I wanted a man who would treat me like a princess, but I finally had to concede that there is no such thing. Brandon gave it his best shot, but I grew tired of his pathetic efforts. There are no princes left in the world today." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your friendship and contest.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023
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Thank you. I think princes went out with the knights in shining armour. Lol. There are some wonderful men out there, but no princes.
Comment from Douglas Goff
Great story. You are a good friend.
Fixes:
Sandy laughed, "I guess I never gave up looking for my prince.
(Period instead of comma after 'laughed' as there is no speech tag)
Sandy laughed, "I guess I never gave up looking for my prince.
(Same as above)
Most enjoyable.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023
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Great story. You are a good friend.
Fixes:
Sandy laughed, "I guess I never gave up looking for my prince.
(Period instead of comma after 'laughed' as there is no speech tag)
Sandy laughed, "I guess I never gave up looking for my prince.
(Same as above)
Most enjoyable.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023
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Thank you. I will fix that little error, and thanks for pointing it out.
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Not sure why I wrote the mistake twice? Ha! Good writing.
Comment from Mintybee
This story about two friends searching for a fairy tale is touching. I'm glad that you found what you were looking for, and I'm sad that your friend did not. You drew me in and got me to emotionally connect to your story with ease. I like how your friendship was a stable element in your lives, and in the story. The support it gave your both during difficult times is evident.
Mintybee
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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023
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This story about two friends searching for a fairy tale is touching. I'm glad that you found what you were looking for, and I'm sad that your friend did not. You drew me in and got me to emotionally connect to your story with ease. I like how your friendship was a stable element in your lives, and in the story. The support it gave your both during difficult times is evident.
Mintybee
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023
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Thank you. Sandy and I have been friends since the beginning of our lives. The world will be a sadder place if she leaves before me.